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The kiss.

A night of passion.

2 total reviews 
Comment from irishauthorme
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Hey, neat story, I think we have all been there at one time or another. You have an instinct for people, being able to tell the difference in that last kiss. Sharing that physical love takes it up a notch to the next level, for one, and possibly both, kind of cementing the relationship. I've found that the ladies are better at separating love and sex than we are, maybe because they are more honest about it, while we do not see behind the curtain.
irish

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2021

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine story here albeit sad, this romance started and ended with a kiss. You have two misspelt words here, (goodbye) and (flame) both need adjustment, an unusual love story, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2021