Six Thousand Petals
Rhyming Love9 total reviews
Comment from PENofFIRE
What a beautiful expression of love for your wife. I am sure those words are endearing to her heart. We as writers are blessed to have the God given ability to express our inner thoughts in a way others cannot. Always remember, life and death is in the power of the tongue. Our words speak, use them wisely. Great job as always.
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What a beautiful expression of love for your wife. I am sure those words are endearing to her heart. We as writers are blessed to have the God given ability to express our inner thoughts in a way others cannot. Always remember, life and death is in the power of the tongue. Our words speak, use them wisely. Great job as always.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a delightful poem for the Love Poem for a Special Loved One contest. It is well-balanced and choosing flower petals is a good image of time passing.
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This is a delightful poem for the Love Poem for a Special Loved One contest. It is well-balanced and choosing flower petals is a good image of time passing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
Comment from Gert sherwood
My what lovely words and rhyming words for you love poem telling your loved one
Six thousand Gerbera petals, your very favourite flower
Telling you how much you're loved every second, minute, hour
Gert
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My what lovely words and rhyming words for you love poem telling your loved one
Six thousand Gerbera petals, your very favourite flower
Telling you how much you're loved every second, minute, hour
Gert
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely poem and what a beautiful way to express your love for your beloved by planting the love one's favorite flower so that the petals add up to the countless joy you both share. Best wishes in the contest!
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Lovely poem and what a beautiful way to express your love for your beloved by planting the love one's favorite flower so that the petals add up to the countless joy you both share. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
Comment from Wendy G
What a beautiful poem of love, thoughtfully written with great gentleness and sensitivity. Your choice of her flower to write about and the romance of counting the days (and petals) is quite lovely.
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What a beautiful poem of love, thoughtfully written with great gentleness and sensitivity. Your choice of her flower to write about and the romance of counting the days (and petals) is quite lovely.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem for your loved one. I like the repeated use of the words six thousand gerbera petals for expressions of love. Beautiful photo to go with your poem. Well done. Happy Anniversary. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a beautifully written poem for your loved one. I like the repeated use of the words six thousand gerbera petals for expressions of love. Beautiful photo to go with your poem. Well done. Happy Anniversary. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
Comment from Pantygynt
I am sure there is enough end rhyme here for this to qualify as a rhyming poem, even if the rhyme scheme is abcb, defe, gg. Or did they want mono-rhyme all the way through?
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I am sure there is enough end rhyme here for this to qualify as a rhyming poem, even if the rhyme scheme is abcb, defe, gg. Or did they want mono-rhyme all the way through?
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
Comment from Edward Escobar
Absolutely a stunning, mesmerizing display of love fused by the image that heightens not only the eyes but that deepens the heart with a caressing like summertime breeze. Very deep and much appreciated.
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Absolutely a stunning, mesmerizing display of love fused by the image that heightens not only the eyes but that deepens the heart with a caressing like summertime breeze. Very deep and much appreciated.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I wonder how many flowers that would be? It sounds like a lot of showers for your loved one here just to get the answer yes, a fine write filled with fine loving intentions, love Dolly x
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I wonder how many flowers that would be? It sounds like a lot of showers for your loved one here just to get the answer yes, a fine write filled with fine loving intentions, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
