haiku (craning over path)
5-7-5 Poem27 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your words plus image pair perfectly, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your contest entry. Good job with the style required. Your syllable count is correct per line. The words are descriptive and create great imagery. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Your words plus image pair perfectly, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your contest entry. Good job with the style required. Your syllable count is correct per line. The words are descriptive and create great imagery. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thank you Jan!
Comment from L. Kalere
Very nice 5/7/5 on Spring. It's short on words but full of poetic license, better than many with x10 the number of words. I think you should do well in the contest. Best of luck.
Linda
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Very nice 5/7/5 on Spring. It's short on words but full of poetic license, better than many with x10 the number of words. I think you should do well in the contest. Best of luck.
Linda
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thanks Linda!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful picture and I thought it was a jigsaw puzzle at first, a beautiful reminder that the trees will provide a canopy to protect us from the rain as spring will soon be here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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A beautiful picture and I thought it was a jigsaw puzzle at first, a beautiful reminder that the trees will provide a canopy to protect us from the rain as spring will soon be here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thanks Dolly!
Comment from Julie Sandy
Lovely entry for the competition, I like the idea of the tree as an umbrella form the unexpected spring showers.
Lovely artwork also
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Lovely entry for the competition, I like the idea of the tree as an umbrella form the unexpected spring showers.
Lovely artwork also
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thank you Julie!
Comment from Susan Newell
I'd give this six, but am holding onto one, just in case I really, really need it later. Word choice is excellent "craning" and "canopy" in particular. Nature has a way of providing. It's up to us to recognize. I love what the filter did to the photo. This is an excellent entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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I'd give this six, but am holding onto one, just in case I really, really need it later. Word choice is excellent "craning" and "canopy" in particular. Nature has a way of providing. It's up to us to recognize. I love what the filter did to the photo. This is an excellent entry for the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thank you Susan!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Do like your Haiku-like connection with Spring trees and umbrellas as 'April showers do bring May flowers.' And for the sudden rainstorm, a cover is needed.
Please fix your spelling for verdandt (sic) in middle line.
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Do like your Haiku-like connection with Spring trees and umbrellas as 'April showers do bring May flowers.' And for the sudden rainstorm, a cover is needed.
Please fix your spelling for verdandt (sic) in middle line.
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thanks. Have start using spell check when I?m on the iPad. Thick thumbs literally fat finger the keys!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, I
was going to say it
reminded me of puzzle pieces.
-Thanks for sharing about it.
-A well written poem with
good syllable count and topic.
-Effective imagery of the
tree leaves creating a canopy.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Note: verdant
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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-Very nice image, I
was going to say it
reminded me of puzzle pieces.
-Thanks for sharing about it.
-A well written poem with
good syllable count and topic.
-Effective imagery of the
tree leaves creating a canopy.
-A good satori line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
-Note: verdant
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thank you...yes...fat fingered ?verdant? but fixed now!
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You are quite welcome.
