First Green
Springtime8 total reviews
Comment from PENofFIRE
As always, you painted another lovely picture with your pen. You chose your words well and the artwork is perfect for this little poem. This has me thinking of the oncoming season. Very well done.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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As always, you painted another lovely picture with your pen. You chose your words well and the artwork is perfect for this little poem. This has me thinking of the oncoming season. Very well done.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Thanks for a very positive review
Geoff
Comment from Susan Newell
I love the metaphor. Here are the budding leaves on recon, scoping out the territory. Is it safe to bring up the troops? And it really is like an onslaught when all the leaves unfurl and show their lushness in May. (At least it's May where I live.)
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I love the metaphor. Here are the budding leaves on recon, scoping out the territory. Is it safe to bring up the troops? And it really is like an onslaught when all the leaves unfurl and show their lushness in May. (At least it's May where I live.)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Although we watch for the flowers, the buds on the trees do take precedence. The beautiful shade of green soon appears and lifts our spirits as they burst into leaves.
Ralf
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Although we watch for the flowers, the buds on the trees do take precedence. The beautiful shade of green soon appears and lifts our spirits as they burst into leaves.
Ralf
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry/ We are seeing that first greenery right now. Good job with your syllable count per line. The image is perfect. I like the Springy color scheme. Your words create great imagery. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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I enjoyed your contest entry/ We are seeing that first greenery right now. Good job with your syllable count per line. The image is perfect. I like the Springy color scheme. Your words create great imagery. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
Comment from zanya
Yes, is there a more beautiful sight than the buds opening on the trees in Spring ? Hope is born in our hearts when we catch a glimpse of this precious sight
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Yes, is there a more beautiful sight than the buds opening on the trees in Spring ? Hope is born in our hearts when we catch a glimpse of this precious sight
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem for trees in spring. Great photo choice to go with your words as well . Leaves just budding. The first green . Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a nicely written poem for trees in spring. Great photo choice to go with your words as well . Leaves just budding. The first green . Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile and of course spring is an apt name as foliage starts springing up and nothing stops their growth as the garden is taken over, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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This made me smile and of course spring is an apt name as foliage starts springing up and nothing stops their growth as the garden is taken over, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely poem about spring bursting out, beginning with a few shy blooms. "Onslaught" is a fitting word choice.
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You have made effective use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely poem about spring bursting out, beginning with a few shy blooms. "Onslaught" is a fitting word choice.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
