Spring's Messenger
Six Word Poem26 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Spring's Messenger
by C2
Hello, C2,
There is something magical about blooming flowers in spring... I like the imagery of your short poem...my favorite form. Nice imagery. Good word count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Spring's Messenger
by C2
Hello, C2,
There is something magical about blooming flowers in spring... I like the imagery of your short poem...my favorite form. Nice imagery. Good word count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thanks GBR!
Comment from Anne Johnston
"with heraldry
redbuds proclaim
winter's defeat"
We don't have redbud trees here but I have been in Virginia in the spring when they were just blooming and they are certainly a sure sign that winter is over.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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"with heraldry
redbuds proclaim
winter's defeat"
We don't have redbud trees here but I have been in Virginia in the spring when they were just blooming and they are certainly a sure sign that winter is over.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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They are a welcome relief after the winter we had in Texas.
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Yes you had a bad winter. We had a lot of snow and cold here as well
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork, Chris.
-You have used your
six words well.
-Effective imagery
with "heraldry" and "redbuds."
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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-Very nice artwork, Chris.
-You have used your
six words well.
-Effective imagery
with "heraldry" and "redbuds."
-A good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Susan Newell
Very nice, Chris. I like the use of the word "heraldry" (I see banners waving) because of it's military implications and the compatibility with both "proclaim" (I hear trumpets blowing in the background) and your closing word "defeat." You have made very good use of your six words.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Very nice, Chris. I like the use of the word "heraldry" (I see banners waving) because of it's military implications and the compatibility with both "proclaim" (I hear trumpets blowing in the background) and your closing word "defeat." You have made very good use of your six words.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thank you Susan. The picture is from one of the redbuds at our lake cabin. They really did ?proclaimed with heraldry.? Thanks for the six-stars!
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You earned the stars.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry. I like the way you presented your six words. The picture is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Your words, though only six as required, speak volumes about the arrival of Spring. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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I enjoyed your contest entry. I like the way you presented your six words. The picture is a great pairing with your well-chosen words. Your words, though only six as required, speak volumes about the arrival of Spring. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from LisaCalton
Beautiful. It's amazing how powerful six little words can be and the meaning they bring. I love your beginning, "with heraldry". You wrote a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Beautiful. It's amazing how powerful six little words can be and the meaning they bring. I love your beginning, "with heraldry". You wrote a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Thank you Lisa!
