Spring's Messenger
Six Word Poem26 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I found the use of the word heraldry in this poem interesting. Every so often the difference between different Englishes is brought home to me. Usually through work, but occasionally as now on this site. Coming from England with our quaint English, pomp would be the more usual choice, or ceremony to shock.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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I found the use of the word heraldry in this poem interesting. Every so often the difference between different Englishes is brought home to me. Usually through work, but occasionally as now on this site. Coming from England with our quaint English, pomp would be the more usual choice, or ceremony to shock.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you Katherine!
Comment from June Sargent
Yes - we are all more than ready for winter to depart - and there are signs that spring is waiting in the wings. These red berries are evidence. Great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Yes - we are all more than ready for winter to depart - and there are signs that spring is waiting in the wings. These red berries are evidence. Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thanks June!
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, they are like the royal robes of a king, marching out in splendour, having vanquished the enemy of winter. Very creative, and a lovely image to accompany. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Yes, they are like the royal robes of a king, marching out in splendour, having vanquished the enemy of winter. Very creative, and a lovely image to accompany. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you Wendy!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! I like your poem. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! I like your poem. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
The cold of winter melts away and spring brings a new beginning. You have said it beautifully in a few words. And with feelings. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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The cold of winter melts away and spring brings a new beginning. You have said it beautifully in a few words. And with feelings. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from l.raven
Hi C2, I live in Illinois...
and just before I left we had a lot of snow...
but you could see where things were starting to plume...
it's time for Winter to go into hibernation...
and Spring to wake up...
I love your poem...very nicely written...
and I love your picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Hi C2, I live in Illinois...
and just before I left we had a lot of snow...
but you could see where things were starting to plume...
it's time for Winter to go into hibernation...
and Spring to wake up...
I love your poem...very nicely written...
and I love your picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thanks Linda. I hope you return to warm weather and flowering trees!
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Hi C, their expecting more snow...sigh...and your always so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Boogienights
Love this short poem and picture. It's seeing things like this that show us that spring really will come soon, it gives us hope. I personally can't wait. Great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Love this short poem and picture. It's seeing things like this that show us that spring really will come soon, it gives us hope. I personally can't wait. Great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you Boogienights!
Comment from QC Poet
Excellent 6 word poetry, hearaldry a word I've not heard that often added to the intrigue of the writing, Even had to look it up to refresh my failing memory so Thank you also for that. LOL. Good Luck in the six word contest. Blessings.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Excellent 6 word poetry, hearaldry a word I've not heard that often added to the intrigue of the writing, Even had to look it up to refresh my failing memory so Thank you also for that. LOL. Good Luck in the six word contest. Blessings.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your six words in this very timely piece. I don't remember a year when people yearned for spring more than they do this year. Good use of personification
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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You have made excellent use of your six words in this very timely piece. I don't remember a year when people yearned for spring more than they do this year. Good use of personification
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you Janice!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Chris,
Your well chosen six words have created a strong message...
the battle will be won. Sometimes it's just a matter of time.
Super nice presentation as well.
Best wishes to your in the contest,
Anna
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Chris,
Your well chosen six words have created a strong message...
the battle will be won. Sometimes it's just a matter of time.
Super nice presentation as well.
Best wishes to your in the contest,
Anna
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you Anna!
