One Drink and I'm Fine
Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
I really like this poem that you have composed for that prompt.
It flows along in a smooth manner and your free verse form is
done well.
Here is one stanza that I really like:
"I only drink one Budweiser,
it's not like I go like guns in blazing,
my mind thinks better,
I don't need a babysitter."
I doubt you need any warnings on this poem.
It might prevent some readers from viewing it.
That's my opinion.
Well done,
Anna
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
Poet,
I really like this poem that you have composed for that prompt.
It flows along in a smooth manner and your free verse form is
done well.
Here is one stanza that I really like:
"I only drink one Budweiser,
it's not like I go like guns in blazing,
my mind thinks better,
I don't need a babysitter."
I doubt you need any warnings on this poem.
It might prevent some readers from viewing it.
That's my opinion.
Well done,
Anna
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
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You're welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing about this fictional character who knows his limits and drinks only one beer. That kind of moderation is the best. Alcohol like beer and wine are not bad - it's overdrinking that is bad. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
Thanks for sharing about this fictional character who knows his limits and drinks only one beer. That kind of moderation is the best. Alcohol like beer and wine are not bad - it's overdrinking that is bad. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Rosalie Lawrence
Drinking affects people in different ways, just as a combination of certain words strung together carefully and stored in the mind of the reader can bring on a form of intoxication. I got slightly tipsy on your words, but this was only one poem. Stay sober and write on.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
Drinking affects people in different ways, just as a combination of certain words strung together carefully and stored in the mind of the reader can bring on a form of intoxication. I got slightly tipsy on your words, but this was only one poem. Stay sober and write on.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Thank you! I am always sober.
Comment from kahpot
"makes me more of an adult" some would think that, I can admire anyone who can limit themselves to one only, not sure why you put an adults only viewing on this work, I found it to be a most enjoyable read-no swearing or anything that would offend, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
"makes me more of an adult" some would think that, I can admire anyone who can limit themselves to one only, not sure why you put an adults only viewing on this work, I found it to be a most enjoyable read-no swearing or anything that would offend, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Thank you!