Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Spring Rosebuds"multi-author book number two
3 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Thorns and beauty that pricks the imagination, love the chosen artwork here, your words add a great image, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thorns and beauty that pricks the imagination, love the chosen artwork here, your words add a great image, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Raul1
This is a very good poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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This is a very good poem. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You're welcome!
Comment from lyenochka
I like the sense of power of the rose bloom coming through the life and energy of the thorny stem. Beautiful picture and nice alliteration with the "thrusts through thorny."
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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I like the sense of power of the rose bloom coming through the life and energy of the thorny stem. Beautiful picture and nice alliteration with the "thrusts through thorny."
Comment Written 13-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy