Crafted Ruse
Kyrielle Poem Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
I have no idea of the many technicalities of writing the different styles of poetry so I can't comment on your style, but it read so beautifully and I liked what you said. I think it was done perfectly. Smiles to you!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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I have no idea of the many technicalities of writing the different styles of poetry so I can't comment on your style, but it read so beautifully and I liked what you said. I think it was done perfectly. Smiles to you!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Carol. Yeah, there's too many poetry forms out there to try and keep up with them all. lol I really appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked it.
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Ron
Comment from LyndaS
An excellent example of what a creative, talented poet can do with this challenge. The whole concept of this post is intriguing and thought provoking. Indeed, where will I go today and who will I be?
I love that you took your repeating line and had it fall within the stanzas throughout the poem. Depending on where this line is, you need to be aware of the lines before or after it otherwise it's just rhyming every other line with no point to it.
This is a strong entry into this contest and it has winner written all over it. And....awesome image to go with the post. Killer presentation!! Well done, author. Lynda
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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An excellent example of what a creative, talented poet can do with this challenge. The whole concept of this post is intriguing and thought provoking. Indeed, where will I go today and who will I be?
I love that you took your repeating line and had it fall within the stanzas throughout the poem. Depending on where this line is, you need to be aware of the lines before or after it otherwise it's just rhyming every other line with no point to it.
This is a strong entry into this contest and it has winner written all over it. And....awesome image to go with the post. Killer presentation!! Well done, author. Lynda
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the great review and gracious sixer, Lynda. Yeah, a lot of people just repeat the first or last line and to me that's just taking the easy way out. I feel sorry for them. Lol. Hopefully this piece will inspire them to become better writers. I dearly appreciate the precious rating, Lynda. I'm glad you liked the entry. Thank you again.
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you be welcome :-)
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a beautifully crafted ruse expounding on a poet's freedom to create, and vicariously become, anyone (or any thing). And the frosting on the cake is the veil of anonymity for the contest. Bravo! Sorry, no sixes left.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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This is a beautifully crafted ruse expounding on a poet's freedom to create, and vicariously become, anyone (or any thing). And the frosting on the cake is the veil of anonymity for the contest. Bravo! Sorry, no sixes left.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Susan. I really appreciate the big six offer and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece and I hope you have a great weekend.
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You are welcome.
