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When, Finally, I See Your Face

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Comment from Joanne Gill
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This is a beautifully written kyrielle poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. I love your repeated line of when finally I see your face. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
    Thank you. I appreciate your comments and that you read my poem. Hugs and blessings.
reply by Joanne Gill on 11-Mar-2021
    Your welcome
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very lovely poem you have penned and I feel the same way my friend. Oh to see His face will be wonderful and thank Him for all He has done for me. You used great words and very lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
    Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and review. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from Norm Valentine
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Very nice sentiment. I, too, look forward to that day. Especially, I like the line "But in your eyes, my name will shine". Encourage you to keep writing.

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 Comment Written 11-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
    Could you please tell me what was not up to par? I like to get constructive criticism so that I can improve my work.
reply by Norm Valentine on 11-Mar-2021
    I think it was very much up to par.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a faith-based poem in the form of a kyrielle. It made it very readable. I have only written two or three of those. My favorite line was this one: But in your eyes, my name will shine,
and this has a happy, optimistic tone throughout.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
    Thank you, I think that's my favorite line to. Thank you for the review. Hugs.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A faithful write filled with the glory of finally going home, not an expert at this form, but I wish you luck with the contest, fine sentiments here, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 11-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
    Thank you. Your comments are humbly appreciated. Hugs and blessings.