When, Finally, I See Your Face
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written kyrielle poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. I love your repeated line of when finally I see your face. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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This is a beautifully written kyrielle poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. I love your repeated line of when finally I see your face. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments and that you read my poem. Hugs and blessings.
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Your welcome
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely poem you have penned and I feel the same way my friend. Oh to see His face will be wonderful and thank Him for all He has done for me. You used great words and very lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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This is a very lovely poem you have penned and I feel the same way my friend. Oh to see His face will be wonderful and thank Him for all He has done for me. You used great words and very lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and review. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from Norm Valentine
Very nice sentiment. I, too, look forward to that day. Especially, I like the line "But in your eyes, my name will shine". Encourage you to keep writing.
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Very nice sentiment. I, too, look forward to that day. Especially, I like the line "But in your eyes, my name will shine". Encourage you to keep writing.
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Could you please tell me what was not up to par? I like to get constructive criticism so that I can improve my work.
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I think it was very much up to par.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a faith-based poem in the form of a kyrielle. It made it very readable. I have only written two or three of those. My favorite line was this one: But in your eyes, my name will shine,
and this has a happy, optimistic tone throughout.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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This is a faith-based poem in the form of a kyrielle. It made it very readable. I have only written two or three of those. My favorite line was this one: But in your eyes, my name will shine,
and this has a happy, optimistic tone throughout.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you, I think that's my favorite line to. Thank you for the review. Hugs.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write filled with the glory of finally going home, not an expert at this form, but I wish you luck with the contest, fine sentiments here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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A faithful write filled with the glory of finally going home, not an expert at this form, but I wish you luck with the contest, fine sentiments here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you. Your comments are humbly appreciated. Hugs and blessings.