When, Finally, I See Your Face
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Comment from patcelaw
This is as a beautifully worded poem for the contest. The Gospel message is powerful. May you have a wonderful week. God bless.
Patricia
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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This is as a beautifully worded poem for the contest. The Gospel message is powerful. May you have a wonderful week. God bless.
Patricia
Comment Written 14-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your comments and review. It's humbly appreciate it. Hugs and blessings to you.
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Thank you so much for your kind review. It is appreciated very much. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent Kyrielle, the last line is a strong one, it adds emphasis and reinforces the work to not be sidelined by our dissatisfaction with here, our home is in Heaven, our temporary dwelling place is here, and even our bodies are on loan. This is a beautifully written Kyrielle, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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This is an excellent Kyrielle, the last line is a strong one, it adds emphasis and reinforces the work to not be sidelined by our dissatisfaction with here, our home is in Heaven, our temporary dwelling place is here, and even our bodies are on loan. This is a beautifully written Kyrielle, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you so very much. I humbly appreciate your comments and thoughtfulness. Hugs and blessings to you.
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Well done,
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This well-written poem is suffused with anticipation of seeing the face of Jesus. What could be more pleasing? When that day comes we will all be comforted.
'So, I anticipate this day
When dark is filled with lightened space,
Your smile will say a thousand words
When, finally, I see your face."
Ralf
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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This well-written poem is suffused with anticipation of seeing the face of Jesus. What could be more pleasing? When that day comes we will all be comforted.
'So, I anticipate this day
When dark is filled with lightened space,
Your smile will say a thousand words
When, finally, I see your face."
Ralf
Comment Written 13-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Yes, and oh? What a glorious day that will be! Thank you for your review and comments. Hugs and blessings always.
Comment from Wendy G
I found this poem extremely moving, and it reminded he of the beautiful hymn "By and by when I look on His face". It will be wonderful to see him as He is, and to be welcomed by His warm embrace. Thank you for a beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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I found this poem extremely moving, and it reminded he of the beautiful hymn "By and by when I look on His face". It will be wonderful to see him as He is, and to be welcomed by His warm embrace. Thank you for a beautiful poem.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your supportive and kind comments. I'm glad you liked my poem. Hugs.
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Thank you so much for your supportive and kind comments. I'm glad you liked my poem. Hugs.
Comment from Aussie
I wish you well in the Kyrielle contest. Your poem speaks loudly of your faith in the Lord. Yes, you will meet again in heaven. "There is no death tho' eyes grow dim, there is no death when I lean on Him. I'll lean on Him forever and He'll forsake me never." Keep sending the word out, we need more folks that have faith. Blessings, K XX
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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I wish you well in the Kyrielle contest. Your poem speaks loudly of your faith in the Lord. Yes, you will meet again in heaven. "There is no death tho' eyes grow dim, there is no death when I lean on Him. I'll lean on Him forever and He'll forsake me never." Keep sending the word out, we need more folks that have faith. Blessings, K XX
Comment Written 13-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much. Hugs and blessings to you.
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Thank you so much. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Leann:
This is a lovely kyrielle poem.
"But my soul will know it's you...when dark is filled with lighted space."
These are excellent sentiments which make your poem inspirational and very touching as you bring Jesus reaching down to our lovel.
This is a wonderful poem and photo.
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Leann:
This is a lovely kyrielle poem.
"But my soul will know it's you...when dark is filled with lighted space."
These are excellent sentiments which make your poem inspirational and very touching as you bring Jesus reaching down to our lovel.
This is a wonderful poem and photo.
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Cindy, for your kind and thoughtful review. hugs and blessings.
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Thank you, Cindy, for your kind and thoughtful review. hugs and blessings.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I really like the kyrielle. Yours is excellent in every respect--skillfully written with great rhyme and meter, vividly descriptive of the glory of being in Heaven with the Lord and loved ones, and uplifting.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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I really like the kyrielle. Yours is excellent in every respect--skillfully written with great rhyme and meter, vividly descriptive of the glory of being in Heaven with the Lord and loved ones, and uplifting.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked my poem. Hugs and blessings.
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked my poem. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from damommy
This is an excellent Kyrielle. I know it's written with a spouse in mind, but I lost a son in September and I look forward to seeing him again in Heaven. Thank you for this lovely poem. It's very comforting.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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This is an excellent Kyrielle. I know it's written with a spouse in mind, but I lost a son in September and I look forward to seeing him again in Heaven. Thank you for this lovely poem. It's very comforting.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Oh, I am so sorry to hear of your loss. God bless you. Thank you so much for your kind words. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Nothing is difficult for those who carry the love of Jesus with them. He will forgive your past, will show the way to a bright future and will be ready to welcome you to Heaven when the time comes. Have faith in Him. Things will work out by themselves. I enjoyed reading this spiritual poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Nothing is difficult for those who carry the love of Jesus with them. He will forgive your past, will show the way to a bright future and will be ready to welcome you to Heaven when the time comes. Have faith in Him. Things will work out by themselves. I enjoyed reading this spiritual poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, spiritual, clear and creative. Thank you
for the author's notes - they were filled with hope. The reader pondered
on the words of this poem and thought about one day seeing loved ones. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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The author's words are engaging, spiritual, clear and creative. Thank you
for the author's notes - they were filled with hope. The reader pondered
on the words of this poem and thought about one day seeing loved ones. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, including the notes. Also, thank you for your thoughtful review. It is humbly appreciated. Hugs and blessings.
