Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Bill, I like how you matched the font color with the flowers in the artwork. Maybe these flowers hum with bees. I like the personification and the rhyme.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Joan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021

Thank you, Joan

reply by dragonpoet on 02-Apr-2021

You're welcome, Bill.
Joan

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Bill--congrats on your prize for this charming piece--brilliant assonance with UMS --four out of six words--takes this over the top. Glad I caught up to this! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021

Thank you, Liz, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

Bill,

I like your clever rhymes and the sounds of autumn in your hums and mons, and mums. Your presentation is good, too. Congratulations on placing in the contest!

Patricia

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021

Thank you, Patricia

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

First of all, I can't imagine making a poem out 6 words (I get quite wordy with my stories) lol but you did a fantastic job of rhyming and blending it with your choice of artwork. Fabulous! I also chose this particular poem because it only has 14 reviews and the next one will earn you a ribbon.... It's called Robyn's Surprise! Have a great day! Smiles from Carol

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021

Well thank you so much, Carol. I read that piece and will search for those opportunities too. Happy day.

reply by Begin Again on 18-Mar-2021

Smiles to you, my friend! Have a great day!

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I must say this poem has originality. Who would have thought of putting persimmons and chrysanthemums, We use to have a persimmon tree in the corner of our yard. They weren't my favorite fruit but it had to be fall before they ripened. If you tried to eat one before the frost came it was awful.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Thank you, Beth.

Comment from Earl Corp

Exceptional

i have to give six stars to anyone who can write a six word poem that rhymes and makes sense. Kudos!!! Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021

Thanks, Earl. I appreciate the high marks.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Hey, Bill. Fall hues and hums do have their particular flavours and you have captured those perfectly within six words. I was thinking it might be more so that is magic.

Wishing you great luck with the Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021

Thank you, Gloria

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Bill:
Your photo is really nice. I like your six word poem. It captures the essence of autumn with the photo and the flowers you mention.
Nice colors for the body of the poem.
Good to hear from you, Bill.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021

Thanks, Cindy

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Wonderful and beautiful wording. I love that word flow of hums, mons and mum. It is perfect for such a short poem. I image you choose is perfect for brightening up the image and the use of color in the words.
Thank you for the read.
Regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021

Thanks, Mary

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Excellent

Dear Bill, when you wax poetical, you do it in spades. This is an absolutely terrific and beautiful Six Word Poem. That you have chosen to match your picture with text in color, makes reading it, a sheer delight.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021

Thanks, Suzanna