Betrayal
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38 total reviews
Comment from DSchlosser
Can I come too? I want to go to the Bahamas and have a vacation. That would be an awesome trip after being stuck in the hospital for weeks on end. These chapters are running really smoothly through this story and makes it easy to get a couple done in a day with my busy schedule. Awesome work!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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Can I come too? I want to go to the Bahamas and have a vacation. That would be an awesome trip after being stuck in the hospital for weeks on end. These chapters are running really smoothly through this story and makes it easy to get a couple done in a day with my busy schedule. Awesome work!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021
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I went there a few years ago, it really was a lovely holiday. I think that was why I chose it for Grant to hide Tania away. I'm glad you find my writing easy to read, that's a lovely compliment. Thank you! I hope you enjoy what's coming up later. :)) Enjoy the rest of your day. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
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One of these days, if I ever have money again, I hope to travel to places like this. Just getting out of Illinois would be nice for once. I hope the weather was good on the trip, but I think just being on a beach away from work is better whether there's rain or shine.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Sandra,
Still going strong here.
I don't need to tell any of you what I think of this ridiculous and unexpected state of affairs. - this felt a little stilted or off to me. It may need to be something like 'i think of this as ridiculous and an unexpected...'
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Hi Sandra,
Still going strong here.
I don't need to tell any of you what I think of this ridiculous and unexpected state of affairs. - this felt a little stilted or off to me. It may need to be something like 'i think of this as ridiculous and an unexpected...'
Comment Written 08-May-2021
reply by the author on 09-May-2021
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Another fabulous review, my friend. Thank you so much. It's nice to see you on here again. I've missed you. Thanks again, Gareth. More hugs. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from DeboraDyess
I REALLY don't like Grant's mom. Just saying ...
~I'll phone you as and when I know anything >> I'm assuming this is like our 'if and when' but wanted to make sure. :)
~I'd be like Tania -- THE Bahamas??!! lol
@3ll done, as usual!
D
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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I REALLY don't like Grant's mom. Just saying ...
~I'll phone you as and when I know anything >> I'm assuming this is like our 'if and when' but wanted to make sure. :)
~I'd be like Tania -- THE Bahamas??!! lol
@3ll done, as usual!
D
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Yes, they both mean the same, just different adaptions. As and when I get the info, is saying there WILL be more info coming, while, if and when, means there might NOT be.
We are going to cruise the Bahamas next year, if the virus doesn't kick in again. Something to look forward to. Thanks again, my wonderful friend. Hugs coming by the bucket load! :)) Sandra
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Vacation or a get away to an island. Like the idea that these fellows realize that the women are in danger and they need to keep them safe from the outside world. Wow!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Vacation or a get away to an island. Like the idea that these fellows realize that the women are in danger and they need to keep them safe from the outside world. Wow!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2021
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Thank you once more! The men are really wanting to keep both girls safe and away from Colin. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story, thank you, Rosemary. :))
Comment from Ben Colder
Perfect. I can see this coming together with a great ending. A cool dip in the ocean and the moment of realization. Fit for a queen.
Good one Sandy.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Perfect. I can see this coming together with a great ending. A cool dip in the ocean and the moment of realization. Fit for a queen.
Good one Sandy.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you so very much, my dear Chuck, for this lovely review and the lovely stars. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. How is the editing going with your book? Can't wait to buy it. Warm hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandy. xxx
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editing slow but sure. Not certain about publisher at present. So many sharks in the water. lol.
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I know what you mean. Sad, isn't it? xxx
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I know what you mean. Sad, isn't it? xxx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, well it sounds like Grant has turned out to
be a ok kind of guy...and Tania needs to be a bit more
grateful...he's taking her to the Bahamas...and she wants Spain or Greece...
and it looks like Monica and Jeff are getting together...
problem is...they have to watch for Colin and the wicked witch of the universe...I have a feeling he's not out of the picture yet...
each chapter gets better and better my amazing friend...
always looking for more...I sooooo love your story told
sweet girl...now lets see what Colin has up his sleeve...
sending so much love to you beautiful girl...Linda xxoo
I drop in a little bit at night...sigh
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Hi Sandra, well it sounds like Grant has turned out to
be a ok kind of guy...and Tania needs to be a bit more
grateful...he's taking her to the Bahamas...and she wants Spain or Greece...
and it looks like Monica and Jeff are getting together...
problem is...they have to watch for Colin and the wicked witch of the universe...I have a feeling he's not out of the picture yet...
each chapter gets better and better my amazing friend...
always looking for more...I sooooo love your story told
sweet girl...now lets see what Colin has up his sleeve...
sending so much love to you beautiful girl...Linda xxoo
I drop in a little bit at night...sigh
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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My dear, sweet friend, thank you for coming along and reading this part. It was such a surprise to see you, I know exactly how you're feeling. I wrote you an email last night, and just PMd you. Just want you to know I'm with you all the time.
Thank you, dear girl, for the wonderful review and the six stars. you never fail to amaze me. Love you, my dear friend. Hugs coming your way. Sandra xxxxx
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Hi Sandra, your always so welcome my amazing friend...Thank you for everything...I'll email you...so much love....Linda xxoo...I don't want to get to far behind the story told...sigh...hugs coming back at you...
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Sandra:
This is another wonderful chapter in your book. I was thinking Grant was going to offer Monica a job so she would leave town with Tania. I imagine Monica is not too upset about Jeff staying with her while Tania and Grant are gone.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Sandra:
This is another wonderful chapter in your book. I was thinking Grant was going to offer Monica a job so she would leave town with Tania. I imagine Monica is not too upset about Jeff staying with her while Tania and Grant are gone.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for reading this part, and for the lovely comments you've made. No, Monica isn't in the slightest bit upset!! LOL. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxx
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Sandra.
Way back in the early 60s, there used to be a funny show on the radio I listened to. It was called "The Adventures of Chickenman." Every show there was always a mystery that was solved by Chickenman. The best part was the narrator/announcer. He had a deep baritone voice and when something interesting would happen he would say, "Welllllll, what an interesting turn of events. Will chicken man ever be able to solve this one?" You might be able to find Chickenman" on the internet. It is very funny in a very silly way.
Some things I saw when this chapter other than grant and Tania taking a private airplane to the Bahamas to keep her safe. TeeHee. Grant went along to make sure everything is okay. Meanwhile, back at the ranch, Jeff has decided to take responsibility for Monica. We know that both of the ladies need to be protected from Colin and that makes good sense.
Colin and his mother are unpredictable, but they are also a danger to both Tania and Monica. The story is entertaining and it is well conceived and well-written. Good job Sandra.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Hi Sandra.
Way back in the early 60s, there used to be a funny show on the radio I listened to. It was called "The Adventures of Chickenman." Every show there was always a mystery that was solved by Chickenman. The best part was the narrator/announcer. He had a deep baritone voice and when something interesting would happen he would say, "Welllllll, what an interesting turn of events. Will chicken man ever be able to solve this one?" You might be able to find Chickenman" on the internet. It is very funny in a very silly way.
Some things I saw when this chapter other than grant and Tania taking a private airplane to the Bahamas to keep her safe. TeeHee. Grant went along to make sure everything is okay. Meanwhile, back at the ranch, Jeff has decided to take responsibility for Monica. We know that both of the ladies need to be protected from Colin and that makes good sense.
Colin and his mother are unpredictable, but they are also a danger to both Tania and Monica. The story is entertaining and it is well conceived and well-written. Good job Sandra.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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I just went and found Chickenman episode one!!!! LOL. He'll be the next 'Marvel' film! I'll be watching them all now. His costume, is hilarious, I wonder if I can find one for my grandson. Lol.
Thank you, Robert, you've just brightened my day up with this bit of fun, I loved it.
Thank you also for this fabulous review, and the golden 6th star, I loved it all. Sending you a humongous chickenhug! :0)) Sandra xxx
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Every chicken men episode is the is two minutes. My favorite part of every episode was when the baritone announcer made WELL a 2 second word. HAHAHA
I'm glad you like it. It's over 50 years old and still funny.
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I think they knew how to make comedy in those days. Today there is too much political correctness that stops us from having fun. :( Yes, I loved it. xx
Comment from Cindy Warren
Imagine being whisked away to the Bahamas in a private jet! I wouldn't complain. They can relax in the sun while Colin and his crazy mother do something as crazy as they are to get themselves thrown in jail. I wonder what it will be. Can't wait to find out!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Imagine being whisked away to the Bahamas in a private jet! I wouldn't complain. They can relax in the sun while Colin and his crazy mother do something as crazy as they are to get themselves thrown in jail. I wonder what it will be. Can't wait to find out!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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I dream of it all the time, Cindy! Lol. It never happens the way it does in books. Thank you so much for reading this part, and the lovely comments you made. I'm sure something will be happening soon, lol, Grant gave me a little hint. :)) Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
Another excellent chapter. The warm muffins make a nice contrast
with the tense situation.
And off to the Bahamas, now that's a romance writer's dream location.
The developing relation between Jeff and Monica also adds a nice touch
with a bit of humor.
Of course, everything seems a bit too idyllic. I wonder what could go wrong.
I'm sure Sandra will throw in an unexpected twist. LOL
Well done.
I'll book my flight to the Bahamas asap.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Hello Sandra,
Another excellent chapter. The warm muffins make a nice contrast
with the tense situation.
And off to the Bahamas, now that's a romance writer's dream location.
The developing relation between Jeff and Monica also adds a nice touch
with a bit of humor.
Of course, everything seems a bit too idyllic. I wonder what could go wrong.
I'm sure Sandra will throw in an unexpected twist. LOL
Well done.
I'll book my flight to the Bahamas asap.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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Oh, don't book it yet! You won't like it!! Lol.
Thank you so much for this lovely review, Robert. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I thought all romantic books have one romance going on at a time, I decided I'd be different! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
I hope you're feeling ok after your second jab? I've got mine to come. 😣