Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 112 "Ice Packed Life"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
17 total reviews
Comment from Leann DS
Hooray for spring! This was a very unique take on the coming of the season. I liked the rhymes, and the rhythm was a tractive. Hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Hooray for spring! This was a very unique take on the coming of the season. I liked the rhymes, and the rhythm was a tractive. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Comment from country ranch writer
With snow storms moving intoDenver andWyoming it looks like you will still have to wait on mother from being mad before we see spring once again.It has taken a toll on so many.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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With snow storms moving intoDenver andWyoming it looks like you will still have to wait on mother from being mad before we see spring once again.It has taken a toll on so many.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Bless you for your Support and Review. Please stay warm very big and far reaching winter still.
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Fla gets chilly but no snow stay safe
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and poem.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You are right about the rhyme.
-Good seasonal and nature imagery.
-Consider the present tense-envelops.
-The satori line is very good.
-Overall, a good job.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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-Good artwork and poem.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You are right about the rhyme.
-Good seasonal and nature imagery.
-Consider the present tense-envelops.
-The satori line is very good.
-Overall, a good job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Bless you and Thank you for your Support and Reviews.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Bichon
A great example of a haiku! The nature elements in your poem were striking, and even though it's only short, the image is long lasting, that's for sure. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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A great example of a haiku! The nature elements in your poem were striking, and even though it's only short, the image is long lasting, that's for sure. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
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Bless you for your Support and Review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very well written Winter Haiku poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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This is a very nice and very well written Winter Haiku poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
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Comment from Susan Larson
Too bad you missed the deadline on this one. It certainly made an impression on me. I had to go back and count to see if you really said all that in only seventeen syllables. I love the metaphor.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Too bad you missed the deadline on this one. It certainly made an impression on me. I had to go back and count to see if you really said all that in only seventeen syllables. I love the metaphor.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made exxellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive winter haiku. When I'm wrapped up, shivering, I sometimes
forget about winter's unique role in nature.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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You have made exxellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive winter haiku. When I'm wrapped up, shivering, I sometimes
forget about winter's unique role in nature.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
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Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture; events covered by snow, some plants still survive. The poems tells us the world is fair, there is always life infer seasons. Some plants or flowers grow inward weathers and others in cold weather like the poem says: "snow melt feeds earth's womb, coldness enveloped seeds bloom
~ winter's warming doom."
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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I like the picture; events covered by snow, some plants still survive. The poems tells us the world is fair, there is always life infer seasons. Some plants or flowers grow inward weathers and others in cold weather like the poem says: "snow melt feeds earth's womb, coldness enveloped seeds bloom
~ winter's warming doom."
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Seasoned Life Cycles
Ice Packed Life
QC Poet to bad you didn't get your haiku in time for the contest I can see that you followed the requirements. Smiles you described how a late entry for the contest you did well telling us
snow melt feeds earth's womb what a great line and the rest of your haiku how
coldness enveloped seeds bloom
~ winter's warming doom
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Seasoned Life Cycles
Ice Packed Life
QC Poet to bad you didn't get your haiku in time for the contest I can see that you followed the requirements. Smiles you described how a late entry for the contest you did well telling us
snow melt feeds earth's womb what a great line and the rest of your haiku how
coldness enveloped seeds bloom
~ winter's warming doom
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Bless you, and Thank you for Reading, Rating and Reviewing this poem offering.
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You are most welcome QC Poet
Gert
Comment from Susan Newell
Too bad you missed the deadline. This is a great poem. The connection of womb and seed is very good. Thanks for a thoughtful and thought-provoking poem.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Too bad you missed the deadline. This is a great poem. The connection of womb and seed is very good. Thanks for a thoughtful and thought-provoking poem.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you for Reading, Rating and Reviewing this poem offering. Bless you for your Time and Support.