Window to her Soul
5/7/5 Senryu for Contest16 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Gypsy,
Congrats on your first place win with this fantastic Senryu!
I really like your second line with your metaphor -
"two brilliant blue stars" for her eyes. You have a super
satori and gorgeous presentation as well.
AnnaLinda
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Gypsy,
Congrats on your first place win with this fantastic Senryu!
I really like your second line with your metaphor -
"two brilliant blue stars" for her eyes. You have a super
satori and gorgeous presentation as well.
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Anna Linda, thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
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Thanks - You too!
Comment from Bettyanne Twigg
A lovely sentiment that well reflects what can happen to us if we are fortunate, when we are in the endgame of our lives. Well done. The picture is perfect.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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A lovely sentiment that well reflects what can happen to us if we are fortunate, when we are in the endgame of our lives. Well done. The picture is perfect.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Wendy G
I love this image, and I really enjoyed what the poem had to say about a meaningful relationship. He still sees the person within, not the craters after life's experiences. Very well written.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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I love this image, and I really enjoyed what the poem had to say about a meaningful relationship. He still sees the person within, not the craters after life's experiences. Very well written.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy Blue Rose,
Your poem is warm and sweet; a poem about the positives of aging.
This man is older, but still has a young heart. You express this very well in your beautiful senryu entry.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes for health and happiness,
Cindy
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Gypsy Blue Rose,
Your poem is warm and sweet; a poem about the positives of aging.
This man is older, but still has a young heart. You express this very well in your beautiful senryu entry.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes for health and happiness,
Cindy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ekphrastic senryu is excellent and moving. I classify it that way because, without the picture, I wouldn't know what the poem is about. Very moving and appealing
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Your ekphrastic senryu is excellent and moving. I classify it that way because, without the picture, I wouldn't know what the poem is about. Very moving and appealing
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from donette1914
so beautiful romantic and genuine
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable and original with the photo you had chosen
it was a pleasure thank you for sharing
I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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so beautiful romantic and genuine
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable and original with the photo you had chosen
it was a pleasure thank you for sharing
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a magical Senryu an says much about the beholder of these words as they see beyond the age of this woman and view the child they once knew, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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This is a magical Senryu an says much about the beholder of these words as they see beyond the age of this woman and view the child they once knew, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from zanya
Yes - not even the ravages of time and living can erase our spirit - our essence shines forth even among 'deep craters'- a wonderful tribute to the tenacity of the human spirit
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Yes - not even the ravages of time and living can erase our spirit - our essence shines forth even among 'deep craters'- a wonderful tribute to the tenacity of the human spirit
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Window to her Soul', is short succinct and delightfully descriptive. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. To me this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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'Window to her Soul', is short succinct and delightfully descriptive. It was a pleasure to read and review this talented poet's work. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. To me this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Dear Anon, your very welcome.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written senryu poem. It has a very nice presentation and photo to go with your words. Very Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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This is a beautifully written senryu poem. It has a very nice presentation and photo to go with your words. Very Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
