Comment from Jesse James Doty

Exceptional

This is exceptional, and although you didn't find this yourself, I will look the other way and grant you an extra star. The poem you created seems very much like it could have been found, at Woodstock. And the artwork is creative, too. This appears authentic, and good luck with the contest!
Jesse

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thanks for the thoughtful review and sparkly stars Jesse. It was a fun write, cheers, j

reply by Jesse James Doty on 28-Mar-2021

Yes, it was a fun era! I am sure you had fun trying to wrap your head around what it was way back then!
Good luck with the contest!
Jesse

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Poet,

Wow! This is trippy! It's perfect for the time travel prompt.

First...you title is well chosen as well as your artwork.

Very strong finish lines with great alliteration. It's difficult to pick a favorite part, but....

"music drifts hazy
our minds are blown....
the world slowly melting
reality flown."

Do you know you've listed this as general fiction instead of poetry?

Best of luck,
Anna

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021

Thanks AnnaLinda, I thought that this was an excellent prompt with so much potential to explore other times. Thanks for the review, it was fun to write, cheers, j

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

This took me back to the Woodstock days/daze. I was offered a job to drive a pizza delivery truck to Woodstock with a pizza oven and make a bundle. Thank God I had the common sense to turn that job down.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021

Yeah, definitely not self sustaining haha. Though food service and thousands of people with the munchies does sounds good on paper.
Thanks for the review, it was a fun write, cheers, j