Stories-Factual or Fictitious
Non-fiction or Old Wive's Tales4 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your ottava rima challenge poem for the club. Your lines flow well with good use of rhymes. Your words are well-chosen and create great imagery. You are right about everyone having a story to tell. You did a great job for this being your first ottava rima. I could picture what you wrote as I read. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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I enjoyed reading your ottava rima challenge poem for the club. Your lines flow well with good use of rhymes. Your words are well-chosen and create great imagery. You are right about everyone having a story to tell. You did a great job for this being your first ottava rima. I could picture what you wrote as I read. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thanks very much for your review and mentoring. I look forward to writing more Ottava Rima poems and others being a member of the Potlatch Poetry Club.
Comment from country ranch writer
As far as I can tell you did a bang up job. Believe when I say this for they will tell you otherwise my friend. I mosey out of my comfort now and again but It is scary the first time out.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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As far as I can tell you did a bang up job. Believe when I say this for they will tell you otherwise my friend. I mosey out of my comfort now and again but It is scary the first time out.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your review. It is scary the first time.
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Smiles
Comment from eltwelve
Very nicely done. It is impressive that you took a shot, they seem complicated and you succeeded. It was able to question things. I think most of our history is Peter cottontail. Lol
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Very nicely done. It is impressive that you took a shot, they seem complicated and you succeeded. It was able to question things. I think most of our history is Peter cottontail. Lol
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much for your kind review. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a conditional five. I really liked the poem and how you put William Tell in the same basket as Peter Cottontail. The problem is your title. "Factional" refers to factions (splinter groups). The word you want is factual. Don't ask me to figure out if it is an Ottava Rima. :-)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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This is a conditional five. I really liked the poem and how you put William Tell in the same basket as Peter Cottontail. The problem is your title. "Factional" refers to factions (splinter groups). The word you want is factual. Don't ask me to figure out if it is an Ottava Rima. :-)
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your review and I will note the correction needed.
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You are welcome!