A Journey Into Sin
How easily we become a prey to Satan, but God is the victor5 total reviews
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Congratulations. This is a great story. So many souls passed through this gate of sin. Only Jesus can heal us. Thanks for writing such a beautiful story.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Congratulations. This is a great story. So many souls passed through this gate of sin. Only Jesus can heal us. Thanks for writing such a beautiful story.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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I am not sure if have already thanked you for the five star plus rating. I appreciate it so much. I want be sure I thanked you. I pray blessings on you and yours.
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You are welcome
Comment from Bar62
I like the idea of naming the demons with an individual sin, Lust, Gossip, lying, chaos, and so on.
When the Sinner realizes he is lost he cries to Jesus for help, at that point the demons must give up their tormenting this poor soul.
Very nice work!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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I like the idea of naming the demons with an individual sin, Lust, Gossip, lying, chaos, and so on.
When the Sinner realizes he is lost he cries to Jesus for help, at that point the demons must give up their tormenting this poor soul.
Very nice work!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for the five star plus review. Our only help to fight demons in the spirt world is with God's help. It is a real battle and the prize is our eternal souls.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
It is sinful to live a double life as said in this story: "One life lived for all to see, and one lived in the nether world where lies prevail and truth cannot be found." People should perform self evaluation to see whether any of theses sins as said in the story: "Lust, Gossip, Lying, Confusion, Chaos..." do exist. If so, get rid of them. Pray for help.
Good writing piece. Good luck to your contest
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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It is sinful to live a double life as said in this story: "One life lived for all to see, and one lived in the nether world where lies prevail and truth cannot be found." People should perform self evaluation to see whether any of theses sins as said in the story: "Lust, Gossip, Lying, Confusion, Chaos..." do exist. If so, get rid of them. Pray for help.
Good writing piece. Good luck to your contest
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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You are absolutely right in what you say about self evaluation. Fighting demons in the spirit world needs the help of God. It is a real battle and the prize is our eternal souls. Thank you for taking the time to review my story.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Malicious gossip can indeed tear someones soul out with its intense hurt and damning power, a poignant write about the Satan at work here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Malicious gossip can indeed tear someones soul out with its intense hurt and damning power, a poignant write about the Satan at work here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
"Gossip steps into the picture, and with great glee, goes to work." Here is just one example of what vivid imagery and personification can do to bring a piece alive. You do this through hell at this one particular passage really caught my eye. Great work!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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"Gossip steps into the picture, and with great glee, goes to work." Here is just one example of what vivid imagery and personification can do to bring a piece alive. You do this through hell at this one particular passage really caught my eye. Great work!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
