Daybreak
One line poetry30 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
This is a lovely entry for the One Line Poem contest. The rooster is really like a herald trumpeting an important event, so the comparison is a great one. Well written. Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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This is a lovely entry for the One Line Poem contest. The rooster is really like a herald trumpeting an important event, so the comparison is a great one. Well written. Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review of my poem. These short verse poems can be tricky sometimes. So glad you enjoyed it, Wendy dear. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs....
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sally.
When I was a kid I heard the roosters every day. I don't hear them as much these days. There is a guy down the road from us who has a confused rooster. He crows many times during the day. Nobody believes him anymore.
Good luck in the contest.
PAL Z
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Hello Sally.
When I was a kid I heard the roosters every day. I don't hear them as much these days. There is a guy down the road from us who has a confused rooster. He crows many times during the day. Nobody believes him anymore.
Good luck in the contest.
PAL Z
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review of my poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, dear Z. Sending along my best for your day, Sally :))
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You're welcome Sal.
PAL Z
Comment from Ric Myworld
On the farm, I never minded the morning reminder, since I was always already up and awake. But after retiring, and expecting to sleep a little longer in the city. I bought a house across the street from someone who had a rooster and some chickens. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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On the farm, I never minded the morning reminder, since I was always already up and awake. But after retiring, and expecting to sleep a little longer in the city. I bought a house across the street from someone who had a rooster and some chickens. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and fun comments. Your humorous reviews are always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This One Line Poem contest entry speaks beginning is not always easy; confidence, faith and belief help heralding the glorious break of day; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This One Line Poem contest entry speaks beginning is not always easy; confidence, faith and belief help heralding the glorious break of day; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review of my one line poem. Your kindness to me is greatly appreciated. Sending along my very best for your day, Sally :))
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally. a ery clever one line poem that really says it all. Indeed, at first light he stirs and streches towards the light abracing yet another day. Just my imagination getting the better of me. Good luck. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Hi Sally. a ery clever one line poem that really says it all. Indeed, at first light he stirs and streches towards the light abracing yet another day. Just my imagination getting the better of me. Good luck. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and well wishes, dear Ulla. Blessings always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from royowen
Yes indeed, I've been saying for some time that birds are the natural appointed Heralds for God's mercies every morning, and and the cockerel is one of God's most enthusiastic. Well done Sally, good luck, blessings Riy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Yes indeed, I've been saying for some time that birds are the natural appointed Heralds for God's mercies every morning, and and the cockerel is one of God's most enthusiastic. Well done Sally, good luck, blessings Riy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review of my poem, dear Roid. Sending along my very best for your day, Sally Xo
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Bless you too Sally
Comment from juliaSjames
Love the use of 'heralding" in this write, dear Sally. The reader can hear the brazen crowing of the cock in the pre dawn darkness announcing the arrival of the majestic sun..
Excellent entry to this fun contest. I don't have the slightest idea what constitutes one line. Lol
Good luck
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Love the use of 'heralding" in this write, dear Sally. The reader can hear the brazen crowing of the cock in the pre dawn darkness announcing the arrival of the majestic sun..
Excellent entry to this fun contest. I don't have the slightest idea what constitutes one line. Lol
Good luck
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my one line poem, dear Julia. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally xoxoxo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and
presentation, Sally.
-A well written monostich
with a good topic and description.
-Effective imagery showing
"the early break of day" and
how it begins.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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-Very nice artwork and
presentation, Sally.
-A well written monostich
with a good topic and description.
-Effective imagery showing
"the early break of day" and
how it begins.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Pam. It is most appreciated. Sending along my very best for your day, Sally XOs...
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You are very welcome, Sally.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Sally, this is beautifully worded and a lovely read. Lovely display. I wonder if a smaller font to make one line - just to play safe? You never know how the minds of the Committee work. Just a thought!! Best wishes, love Dorothy xx
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Hello Sally, this is beautifully worded and a lovely read. Lovely display. I wonder if a smaller font to make one line - just to play safe? You never know how the minds of the Committee work. Just a thought!! Best wishes, love Dorothy xx
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I took your advice. One line on one line. I do want to win. Sending you my best today as always, dear Dorothy,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Gorgeous! "Brilliant" (as in "metallic") imagery--gotta love the gold-and-silver bling. I would have thought this was a spiritual poem if hadn't seen the huge cock. Cheers! LIZ
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Gorgeous! "Brilliant" (as in "metallic") imagery--gotta love the gold-and-silver bling. I would have thought this was a spiritual poem if hadn't seen the huge cock. Cheers! LIZ
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Liz.
Sal XOs....
