Daybreak
One line poetry30 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Aw, I really enjoyed this, Sal :)
It is so bright and cheery in both word and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Aw, I really enjoyed this, Sal :)
It is so bright and cheery in both word and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely review of my poem. It is so appreciated. Sending along we're very best, they are Debra.
Sally XOs...
Comment from Sharon Davis
A simple, well stated one line poem. The title, image, and text in the body of the piece work well in conjunction with one another to convey the message of daybreak. Good job.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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A simple, well stated one line poem. The title, image, and text in the body of the piece work well in conjunction with one another to convey the message of daybreak. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my poem, dear Sharon. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best for the day, Sally XOs...
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I enjoyed this one-line poem. As it is said, it may be the rooster that does all the crowing but it's the hen that delivers the goods. The darkness is removed by the sun, not the rooster's crowing.!:):) Just a few funny thoughts. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed this one-line poem. As it is said, it may be the rooster that does all the crowing but it's the hen that delivers the goods. The darkness is removed by the sun, not the rooster's crowing.!:):) Just a few funny thoughts. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and fun comments. You are so funny! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
Comment from Begin Again
The proud, strutting rooster is always the first to greet the morn and then, with his loud crowing, he demands that we all come and see the glorious morning sun. Beautiful! Smiles - Carol
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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The proud, strutting rooster is always the first to greet the morn and then, with his loud crowing, he demands that we all come and see the glorious morning sun. Beautiful! Smiles - Carol
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and encouragement, dear Carol. Blessings always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from lyenochka
Such a fun poem! We do need that old-fashioned alarm clock. Actually, the ones in the neighborhood tend to crow whenever they want all day long. Lol. Loved your "heralding the glorious break of day!"
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Such a fun poem! We do need that old-fashioned alarm clock. Actually, the ones in the neighborhood tend to crow whenever they want all day long. Lol. Loved your "heralding the glorious break of day!"
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review and well wishes. It's so appreciated. Sending along my very best for the day, Sally XOs...
Comment from Janetsue
Your energetic one line poem brings back some good memories of when I lived in Puerto Rico with my Air Force family. We lived off-base and our neighbors had chickens and I actually enjoyed the rooster's morning call. (They also had peacocks and that is another matter entirely--they're great to look at; not so much to hear.) LOL Thanks for the super music inclusions, too, Sally! xo Janet
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Your energetic one line poem brings back some good memories of when I lived in Puerto Rico with my Air Force family. We lived off-base and our neighbors had chickens and I actually enjoyed the rooster's morning call. (They also had peacocks and that is another matter entirely--they're great to look at; not so much to hear.) LOL Thanks for the super music inclusions, too, Sally! xo Janet
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments. I'm always glad when people share their personal stories. This sounds very interesting. I adore peacocks. We have them in our neighborhood that run wild. I have written several poems this year about our peacocks. Sending along way very best for the day,
Sally XOs...
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely done, Sally. The rooster likes to announce to the world it is time to be getting got up because there are fields to plow, and seeds to plant.
Wishing you great luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Very nicely done, Sally. The rooster likes to announce to the world it is time to be getting got up because there are fields to plow, and seeds to plant.
Wishing you great luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Gloria. I modified this after our dear Dorothy told me it needed to be (all) in one line. She's right. I did my best to revise it for one line here. :))
I appreciate your kind encouragement.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Sally,
This is a wonderful one line poem.
You describe a rooster's awakening sound in just one line, eleven words. I like the photo of the rooster with a background that is like the color of the sun.
Excellent one line poem, Sally.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings. Hugs,
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Sally,
This is a wonderful one line poem.
You describe a rooster's awakening sound in just one line, eleven words. I like the photo of the rooster with a background that is like the color of the sun.
Excellent one line poem, Sally.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings. Hugs,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Sending a lot of my very best,
Sally XOs...
Comment from Irish Rain
Just beautifully put!!
I have actually never heard a
real rooster.
I've never been a morning person,
or lived near a farm.
Wonderful one-liner!!
Good luck,
blessings...
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Just beautifully put!!
I have actually never heard a
real rooster.
I've never been a morning person,
or lived near a farm.
Wonderful one-liner!!
Good luck,
blessings...
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind comments. My mother grew up on a farm and I have lived in both the city in the country. Sending along my very best and for the day, Sally XOs...
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Happy weekend!!
Comment from fm wright
Really like your one line poem. It conveys a mini story in just a few words. Well done. The photo and videos truly play along with your thought. My best for the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Really like your one line poem. It conveys a mini story in just a few words. Well done. The photo and videos truly play along with your thought. My best for the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. The starshine has left me with a big smile. Thank you for the smiles you bring to me, dear Faye.
Sending along my very best and blessings for your day,
Sally XOs...xo....
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As aleays, you are welcome. Your rooster really brightened my day.
Blessings,
Faye
