Daybreak
One line poetry30 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
Nice one line poem. I wonder if roosters are just reacting to the joy of new day or do they actually feel its their duty to awaken the rest of the world. I really enjoyed the music. You have good taste.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Nice one line poem. I wonder if roosters are just reacting to the joy of new day or do they actually feel its their duty to awaken the rest of the world. I really enjoyed the music. You have good taste.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the kind review of my one line poem. It is most appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The imagery you describe is very animated. Your description appeals to many senses, even the sense of excitement. For some it could arouse a variety of emotions. Well orchestrated.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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The imagery you describe is very animated. Your description appeals to many senses, even the sense of excitement. For some it could arouse a variety of emotions. Well orchestrated.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind in the detailed review. It is always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from patcelaw
Hearing a rooster in at daybreak is something I miss as I live in the city. I remember growing up on a farm be awakened but the crowing roosters. Have a blessed weekend.
Patricia
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Hearing a rooster in at daybreak is something I miss as I live in the city. I remember growing up on a farm be awakened but the crowing roosters. Have a blessed weekend.
Patricia
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review, dear Patricia. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs....
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once while living on a farm, we had a rooster who was mixed up on this time and he didn't wait until pre-dawn he just crowed in the middle of the night. LOL Anyway, I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Once while living on a farm, we had a rooster who was mixed up on this time and he didn't wait until pre-dawn he just crowed in the middle of the night. LOL Anyway, I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and humorous comments. Yes, I have an owl like that in my yard that hoots all night long. Crazy bird! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Some things never change and we don't seem to wonder why? Imagine this... a rooster gets up every morning at daybreak and without fail sings
the same song... Cockle Doodle Do for over 2000 years, that we know about and perhaps many more during B.C. that we don't know about. I find that quite amazing. Thanks for sharing.
Ralf
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Some things never change and we don't seem to wonder why? Imagine this... a rooster gets up every morning at daybreak and without fail sings
the same song... Cockle Doodle Do for over 2000 years, that we know about and perhaps many more during B.C. that we don't know about. I find that quite amazing. Thanks for sharing.
Ralf
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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God's alarm clock. It's in their nature to do so, I suppose. Thank you for the lovely review. Sending you my best today as always, dear Ralf.
Sal XOs....
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Daybreak, uses eleven words to remind the readers of the dawn's alarm clock and how we all can hear it even when we are not around.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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This one-line poem, Daybreak, uses eleven words to remind the readers of the dawn's alarm clock and how we all can hear it even when we are not around.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thanks so much for the wonderful review and kind comments. Sending along my very best, Sally :))
Comment from AnnaLinda
Sally,
You must have put this out before we became fans. Your one line poem/entry has such well chosen words to create clear imagery
and ends with such a positive message.
I enjoyed your music videos and your presentation rocks with
the cock a doodle doo!
AnnaLinda
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Sally,
You must have put this out before we became fans. Your one line poem/entry has such well chosen words to create clear imagery
and ends with such a positive message.
I enjoyed your music videos and your presentation rocks with
the cock a doodle doo!
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thanks so much for the lovely review, dear Anna. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs..
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your one-line poem is appealing and descriptive. Even people who aren't up at daybreak appreciate what it--and the rooster's enthusiastic
sounds--signify.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Your one-line poem is appealing and descriptive. Even people who aren't up at daybreak appreciate what it--and the rooster's enthusiastic
sounds--signify.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments. It is so appreciated, dear Janice. Sending along my very best, Sally Xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I hear this sound from a farm not far from my house in the Canaries, it sometimes tells me to start my day and then other times I roll over and have an extra hour of sleep! A fine write Sally, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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I hear this sound from a farm not far from my house in the Canaries, it sometimes tells me to start my day and then other times I roll over and have an extra hour of sleep! A fine write Sally, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my one line poem. It is so appreciated. Sending along my best for the day, Sally XOs....
Comment from Cindy Warren
Yep, they certainly do get up at dawn. My daughter has one. Fortunately, he doesn't keep it up very long. They can all go back to sleep. That rooster is gutsy, too. He went straight for a VERY large dog who dared stick his nose through the fence. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Yep, they certainly do get up at dawn. My daughter has one. Fortunately, he doesn't keep it up very long. They can all go back to sleep. That rooster is gutsy, too. He went straight for a VERY large dog who dared stick his nose through the fence. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the excellent review of my poem. It is so appreciated. I'm glad you share your personal comments too. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs...
