Potlatch 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Lovely Upside Down"Potlatch Club Submissions 2021
14 total reviews
Comment from zanya
What a cheeky little fellow we have here ! but isn't he just so funny and amusing - maybe that's a good idea to see the world from 'upside down'- might distract our thoughts for a while !
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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What a cheeky little fellow we have here ! but isn't he just so funny and amusing - maybe that's a good idea to see the world from 'upside down'- might distract our thoughts for a while !
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Hi zanya :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, I?m glad you enjoyed my poem!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Susan Newell
This was a fun one that made me wonder what the world would look like moving along all day while he was upside down. Very cute picture about which to choose to write a tribute.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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This was a fun one that made me wonder what the world would look like moving along all day while he was upside down. Very cute picture about which to choose to write a tribute.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Susan, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this quirky little poem. It has excellent rhyme and rhythm.I especially liked the last line. A very uplifting, fun poem. All the very best
. Jen
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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I really enjoyed reading this quirky little poem. It has excellent rhyme and rhythm.I especially liked the last line. A very uplifting, fun poem. All the very best
. Jen
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Jen, for your lovely feedback :) I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun well-written ottava rima for the club, Debra. I enjoyed reading it. What I like best is the POV of the owl. You did a great job with the style--the rhymes work well, there's good flow, and the imagery is great. The last two lines are hilarious and a great way to end your poem. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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What a fun well-written ottava rima for the club, Debra. I enjoyed reading it. What I like best is the POV of the owl. You did a great job with the style--the rhymes work well, there's good flow, and the imagery is great. The last two lines are hilarious and a great way to end your poem. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Jan, Thank you so much for this lovely review of my poem. I'm really happy that you enjoyed it :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great photo that made
me chuckle, Debra.
-I had to look twice
to see its head upside down.
-Owls do the craziest things.
-I like you poem that goes with it,
and it made me laugh.
-A great way to start the morning.
-I like you take on the personality
of this little owl enjoying its day upside down!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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-Great photo that made
me chuckle, Debra.
-I had to look twice
to see its head upside down.
-Owls do the craziest things.
-I like you poem that goes with it,
and it made me laugh.
-A great way to start the morning.
-I like you take on the personality
of this little owl enjoying its day upside down!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Hi Pam :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Best wishes, Debra
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You are very welcome, Debra.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Simply delightful! Brilliant whimsy--priceless pic is spot-on for the clever punchline--did the photo inspire the poem or were you lucky enough to find the perfect image?
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Simply delightful! Brilliant whimsy--priceless pic is spot-on for the clever punchline--did the photo inspire the poem or were you lucky enough to find the perfect image?
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Hi Liz :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, a write inspired by this wonderful picture of this owl looking down in an upside down position, a positive sweet natured write, uplifting and joyous, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, a write inspired by this wonderful picture of this owl looking down in an upside down position, a positive sweet natured write, uplifting and joyous, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Hi Dolly :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from L. Kalere
This is just a darling little poem, so creative and whimsical. Since the photo is so perfect, I can only assume that the words followed. No matter, either way it's wonderful.
Linda
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This is just a darling little poem, so creative and whimsical. Since the photo is so perfect, I can only assume that the words followed. No matter, either way it's wonderful.
Linda
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Hi Linda :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed my picture inspired poem!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Bill Schott
This ottava rima, Lovely Upside Down, has the proper formatting and finds that a different view at the world sometimes gives us a smile. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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This ottava rima, Lovely Upside Down, has the proper formatting and finds that a different view at the world sometimes gives us a smile. Nice.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Hi Bill :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from LisaMay
You ask what made me happy today? - YOUR POEM! It's a delightful presentation from the picture to your words. That owl warming his butt, and the way you've described the pleasure of the day, brought a warm glow to me.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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You ask what made me happy today? - YOUR POEM! It's a delightful presentation from the picture to your words. That owl warming his butt, and the way you've described the pleasure of the day, brought a warm glow to me.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Hi LisaMay :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Best wishes, Debra
