Life's Light
A Cinquain Poem9 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I like the originality of this poem on spring, taken from the perspective of longer sunbeams. I like the image of the reflections marching in step, like a row of soldiers. Well written.
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I like the originality of this poem on spring, taken from the perspective of longer sunbeams. I like the image of the reflections marching in step, like a row of soldiers. Well written.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
The bright sunshine floats through the windows giving the entire room a feel of great change after a long dark winter. It begins a new season shown first by the dust in the air and the days of window cleaning ahead. Spring marks the beginning of Spring cleaning. Yuck! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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The bright sunshine floats through the windows giving the entire room a feel of great change after a long dark winter. It begins a new season shown first by the dust in the air and the days of window cleaning ahead. Spring marks the beginning of Spring cleaning. Yuck! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
Your cinquain poem/entry is really lovely and in great form with an
extraordinary turn from light to darkness and then back to "life's light."
Nice alliteration there as well. Good imagery and a spiritual message
as well.
Great presentation as well.
Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Poet,
Your cinquain poem/entry is really lovely and in great form with an
extraordinary turn from light to darkness and then back to "life's light."
Nice alliteration there as well. Good imagery and a spiritual message
as well.
Great presentation as well.
Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Longer days and shorter nights, warmer breezes and sunny days, spring has a lot to offer and your poem lit the days with bright reflections here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Longer days and shorter nights, warmer breezes and sunny days, spring has a lot to offer and your poem lit the days with bright reflections here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Boogienights
I've read a lot of these but this one stands out. The picture is a perfect fit for your poem. The light coming through the windows, especially the stained glass ones, is like a renewal of life. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I've read a lot of these but this one stands out. The picture is a perfect fit for your poem. The light coming through the windows, especially the stained glass ones, is like a renewal of life. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Jean Lutz1
Artwork and well chosen words speak springtime to the soul. I can wait to "spring forward" in time. My soul runs on Son light, but this weary body needs sun light. Best wishes with your entry.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Artwork and well chosen words speak springtime to the soul. I can wait to "spring forward" in time. My soul runs on Son light, but this weary body needs sun light. Best wishes with your entry.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful and exceptional review, I am honored
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written cinquain poem. Very Beautiful
Photo selection to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This is a nicely written cinquain poem. Very Beautiful
Photo selection to compliment your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Lannell912
Learning about different poems my first time coming up on one of these beautiful what a beautiful pic the colors actually flow along with the words learning the amazement of short lines getting your point across with few words you did a great job at that keep up the good work
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Learning about different poems my first time coming up on one of these beautiful what a beautiful pic the colors actually flow along with the words learning the amazement of short lines getting your point across with few words you did a great job at that keep up the good work
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you so very much
Comment from equestrik
This is a good write for the Cinquain poetry contest. i like the hope that is represented in yor writing and the picture you chose to go with it.All the best to you.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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This is a good write for the Cinquain poetry contest. i like the hope that is represented in yor writing and the picture you chose to go with it.All the best to you.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you so very much