A special day
Your entire life is to come7 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
Isn't that the truth, tody and every day and every moments. I love this picture and the simple happiness on this woman's face. Good presentation and best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Isn't that the truth, tody and every day and every moments. I love this picture and the simple happiness on this woman's face. Good presentation and best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is kind of like the saying that today is the first day of the rest of your life. So today be happy because this is the youngest you will ever be for the rest of your life. Somehow this sounds right but I can't quite get the meaning you're going for. LOL sometimes it takes a little longer for me to figure things out. Good luck with the contest~
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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This is kind of like the saying that today is the first day of the rest of your life. So today be happy because this is the youngest you will ever be for the rest of your life. Somehow this sounds right but I can't quite get the meaning you're going for. LOL sometimes it takes a little longer for me to figure things out. Good luck with the contest~
Patty
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thanks for your comments
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-A very good, positive
message about enjoying
life today because you
will be older tomorrow.
-There are a lot of ways
to look at it, which is a good thing.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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-A good image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-A very good, positive
message about enjoying
life today because you
will be older tomorrow.
-There are a lot of ways
to look at it, which is a good thing.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much Pam for pointing out my stupidity, I have changed it. Must start reading the rules.
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You are welcome, but it wasn't your stupidity. The requirements should have been visible and instead there was a link to see them. I changed the review for you.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a well composed cinquain that reminds us to be joyful of every minute and to seize the time left to us. It's sort of a reverse perspective of "today you begin the rest of your life."
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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This is a well composed cinquain that reminds us to be joyful of every minute and to seize the time left to us. It's sort of a reverse perspective of "today you begin the rest of your life."
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thanks Susan
Comment from Julie Sandy
Great poem for this competition. You used the syllable count very well and I love the message in the poem also.
Thanks for sharing
Good luck in the competition
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Great poem for this competition. You used the syllable count very well and I love the message in the poem also.
Thanks for sharing
Good luck in the competition
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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many thanks Julie
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Enjoy
today
You are now the youngest
that you will ever be throughout
your life"
What a great philosophy to live by - enjoy each day, thankful that the Lord has given us another one to enjoy.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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"Enjoy
today
You are now the youngest
that you will ever be throughout
your life"
What a great philosophy to live by - enjoy each day, thankful that the Lord has given us another one to enjoy.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thanks
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You are welcome
Comment from donette1914
life goes so very fast
you write so very well and nice photo
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with a well penned poem
I hope for the best in the contest and thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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life goes so very fast
you write so very well and nice photo
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with a well penned poem
I hope for the best in the contest and thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thanms Donette for your kind words