Ooey-Gooey
A sticky situation18 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
This is absolutely cute! You leave me wondering what the heck that ooey- gooey, green scum was! I can tell you had fun writing this. Sometimes those prompts can just stir up all kinds of crazy ideas. I really loved it.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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This is absolutely cute! You leave me wondering what the heck that ooey- gooey, green scum was! I can tell you had fun writing this. Sometimes those prompts can just stir up all kinds of crazy ideas. I really loved it.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading
I find doing something outside my passion is a good distraction and my mind feels ready to go again. Plus I love to laugh.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is quite a clever and cute short story using all six of the required words. I've never attempted this type of contest. It seems too difficult, but you made it seem easy. You are a true storyteller. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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This is quite a clever and cute short story using all six of the required words. I've never attempted this type of contest. It seems too difficult, but you made it seem easy. You are a true storyteller. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading
I find doing something outside my passion is a good distraction and my mind feels ready to go again. Plus I love to laugh.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Ooey-Gooey, has all the required words and brings a warning really about some industrial-strength gummy candy that could essentially be used as an adhesive.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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This poem, Ooey-Gooey, has all the required words and brings a warning really about some industrial-strength gummy candy that could essentially be used as an adhesive.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading
I find doing something outside my passion is a good distraction and my mind feels ready to go again. Plus I love to laugh.
You made me laugh.
Comment from eltwelve
That was quite enjoyable to read. It flowed smoothly for easy reading. It clung like sucking mud was quite descriptive, that I could actually hear the sound trying to get a shoe out.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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That was quite enjoyable to read. It flowed smoothly for easy reading. It clung like sucking mud was quite descriptive, that I could actually hear the sound trying to get a shoe out.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading
I did not win the contest m, but had a lot of fun working w the words and being silly.
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, just good fun, always good to have a go and be stretched, and you have woven the words in quite smoothly, despite the rhythm not being quite right. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Yes, just good fun, always good to have a go and be stretched, and you have woven the words in quite smoothly, despite the rhythm not being quite right. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading
I did not win the contest m, but had a lot of fun working w the words and being silly.
Comment from equestrik
Interesting write to go along with your picture of the ooey-gooey green stuff.I definitely would have been in trouble if I had left a shoe behind as well. All the best to you.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Interesting write to go along with your picture of the ooey-gooey green stuff.I definitely would have been in trouble if I had left a shoe behind as well. All the best to you.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading
I followed the rules do not sure why I got a 4. If you read this- let me know what was it that earned a 4.
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As I read it, it just didn't seem cohesive enough for an excellent.
Comment from papa55mike
These contests do make us better writers. All you have to do is look at the list of words. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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These contests do make us better writers. All you have to do is look at the list of words. What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you,
I wrote this one for fun. I saw the world green and had to go for it. The kids love to play w slime these days??
Comment from BethShelby
This is cute. I'll bet you did have fun fitting those words into the poem. I enjoy this kind of contest too but I didn't see this one in time to enter. I think it is good entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This is cute. I'll bet you did have fun fitting those words into the poem. I enjoy this kind of contest too but I didn't see this one in time to enter. I think it is good entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading.
My professional career was science and math. Writing is sort of like a puzzle with emotion. It explains my love for this kind of challenge.
Comment from donette1914
this is so funny a sticky situation and it had happened to each one of us at one time or another
so creative to reach ones heart
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with the photo in your well penned story
I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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this is so funny a sticky situation and it had happened to each one of us at one time or another
so creative to reach ones heart
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with the photo in your well penned story
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading
I seriously laughed, while I wrote this. I like to take a break at time from my serious side and Tap into my silly side.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, mystery Author. I like the rhyme and the fantasy that you used. Your lines read well with good details and great imagery. Yes, the sticky green goo would be icky. Bet wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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You did a good job with your contest entry, mystery Author. I like the rhyme and the fantasy that you used. Your lines read well with good details and great imagery. Yes, the sticky green goo would be icky. Bet wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading
I saw the words and thought it would be fun to see if I could come up w something silly. I feel quite pleased with the ditty-makes me laugh.