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my mother's daughter

a poem

6 total reviews 
Comment from equestrik
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this is a wonderful tribute to your dearly loved mother as well as to your amazing childhood and life with her. She does sound like a wonderful mom and woman.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
    Thanks for the review. My mom just loved this one. She really was the best mom I could ever hope for.
    In Canada back in the 1950's, the gov't wanted women to take a pill for morning sickness and my mom refused. Many babies were born with tiny arms because of that medicine. Thalimide, something like that. My mom researches everything and is 93 years old, no pains, full hair, teeth, always happy and curious, sews like an expert (wedding dress and costumes for me) walks freely every day. She really takes care of herself with good food and her top secret? ....
    bone broth.
reply by equestrik on 08-Mar-2021
    That is truly a fantasic woman and mom!
Comment from Begin Again
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What a beautiful tribute to your Mom and the highest of praise for your childhood memories. You were blessed and so was she. Awesome! Smiles to you and have a blessed day!

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
    Thanks for the lovely review, oh she loved this one. I wish I had the pic of us side by side, like sisters haha, cheers, j
Comment from cupa tea
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It's wonderful that you still have her...Both of my parents passed on years ago...I miss them dearly. See her as much as you can. That would be my advice to you.

The poem ran well and was enjoyable to read
Good luck in the contest.

Blessed be

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
    Thanks for the thoughtful review. Believe me as soon as this pandemic is gone, I am going to visit her in Montreal, she misses me. Cheers, j
Comment from LisaMay
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I loved reading about your Mom and your wonderful childhood. She sounds a really special character, and you've captured how you honour her through your words, especially in the final stanza:
I am my Mother's daughter,
in my eyes right to my core.
She made my life so wonderful,
I could not love her more.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
    Cheers, thanks for the insightful review. We do look and think alike. Miss her, but she is safe and warm for now. I can visit soon I hope
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is a well-written, vividly descriptive, moving, delightful poem--paying a sweet tribute to that unique individual called MOTHER. You have made excellent use of specific details.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
    Thanks for the encouraging review, Yeah I can't wait to visit her again, soon. Have a great weekend, j
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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I love the picture. She is kind and passionate. What a lovely picture.

This poem is full of love between a daughter and a mother. I enjoy the following sentences.
"I am my Mother's daughter, in my eyes right to my core.
She made my life so wonderful, I could not love her more."

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
    Thanks for the insightful review. You know I have been thinking about your words on positive thinking and being grateful often today. That's a sign of a great writer, have a great weekend, cheers, j
reply by Goodadvicechan on 06-Mar-2021
    If you like my thoughts on "Positive thinking, try to read my essay "In Search of a Better Life."