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The joys of spring

The earth awakens

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, The Joys of Spring, uses all the required words and creates a post-winter scene where the troubles of snow are eliminated.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2021


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Comment from equestrik
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I love this picture of this sweet child splashing without a care! I used to love the spring in New England when the snow was slushy and so much fun to splash in.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021


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    Thank you 🙂
Comment from papa55mike
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I love all of the poems about spring today. Rebirth is coming! What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021


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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This poem speaks vividly Mother Nature's springtime gift is ever an welcoming treat as when the earth awakens, air spreads mild fragrance all around, everyone feels happy; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021


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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your uplifting words made me happy for spring to dawn and bring those puddles, the flowers and new life, the kids can get outdoors and enjoy warmer weather, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2021


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Comment from Boogienights
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This is a very nice celebration of spring, using all the required words for the contest. You are right, spring is like a renewal of life and you picked the perfect picture to go with it. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2021


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Comment from Anne Johnston
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Great use of all the words that your given for this contest. Nice picture to illustrate your poem. Children love to splash in puddles. Let's hope spring is getting closer.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
    Thank you 🙂
reply by Anne Johnston on 05-Mar-2021
    You are welcome
Comment from moonsunrise
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What a great image you selected for your poem. Who doesn't love seeing a child jump in a puddle just to have some fun. More adults should do the same. Your cleverly written poem covered so much in so few words.
Great work!
Kind regards.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2021


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Comment from RetroStarfish
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Excellent poem with very good use of all the key words. Spring is a treat and it can't come soon enough. Your poem captures that feeling of anticipation very well.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2021


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    thank you