Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 108 "Which is Funnier?"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Aiona,
I've heard that bad things happen in threes, so I see how things could be funnier in threes. I don't know of any jokes ending on a 'k" sound. But being inspired by a published writer is a good thing, if you don't totally copy his style and lose your own.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Aiona,
I've heard that bad things happen in threes, so I see how things could be funnier in threes. I don't know of any jokes ending on a 'k" sound. But being inspired by a published writer is a good thing, if you don't totally copy his style and lose your own.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Yeah, that was a crappy example. I need to actually write a piece (script or story) utilizing it, and see what the response is. :) Thanks, for the review, Joan.
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You're welcome, Aiona.
Joan
Comment from lyenochka
I'm puzzling over this one. How is it funnier in threes? If something happens three times? Or three characters are involved? I also didn't know what it meant with a K-word. End with a word that stars with an unvoiced velar consonant? Thanks for sharing your advice.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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I'm puzzling over this one. How is it funnier in threes? If something happens three times? Or three characters are involved? I also didn't know what it meant with a K-word. End with a word that stars with an unvoiced velar consonant? Thanks for sharing your advice.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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I will try to give a better example sometime. This poem was kind of shoddy work on my part. I could have done better.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
They say three is a crowd, as two is company. I do like three stanzas though as I think it can be just enough, so you probably won here. Not sure there is more humour in threes, but some comedians would disagree, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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They say three is a crowd, as two is company. I do like three stanzas though as I think it can be just enough, so you probably won here. Not sure there is more humour in threes, but some comedians would disagree, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Yeah, I should have written an example, but I wasn't feeling very witty yesterday. :)
