The Two of Me
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Comment from George 1
This poem grew on me with a few readings. The words are simple and well-chosen, the question at the end confronts the reader to do some work on their own to get the point. Nice work
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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This poem grew on me with a few readings. The words are simple and well-chosen, the question at the end confronts the reader to do some work on their own to get the point. Nice work
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support, Review and Encouragement.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very varied presentation. Succinctly saying and showing, "As the world turns." Isn't it the truth that no matter what, our minds are like a whirling dervish; they never stop?
Ralf
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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A very varied presentation. Succinctly saying and showing, "As the world turns." Isn't it the truth that no matter what, our minds are like a whirling dervish; they never stop?
Ralf
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review, yes, I believe our Thoughts will lead us to where we focus our attention.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your five-line poem is well-written and and thoughtful. Worries certainly can be logically based, originating with real events, etc. I agree, though, that, through imagination, we surely can make things worse.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Your five-line poem is well-written and and thoughtful. Worries certainly can be logically based, originating with real events, etc. I agree, though, that, through imagination, we surely can make things worse.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking poem in its entirety - more realism than philosophy, especially in today's world - cleverly articulated in its easy free verse. Best wishes in the contest with this striking entry...
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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In my opinion, a striking poem in its entirety - more realism than philosophy, especially in today's world - cleverly articulated in its easy free verse. Best wishes in the contest with this striking entry...
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review. Blessings to you.
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You are very welcome indeed...Eve
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You are very welcome indeed...Eve
Comment from Boogienights
A very thought provoking poem, it makes you wonder if perhaps you're just manufacturing your own problems in your mind. I don't have to do this however, I have enough real ones to think about. A interesting take with this 5 line poem...Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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A very thought provoking poem, it makes you wonder if perhaps you're just manufacturing your own problems in your mind. I don't have to do this however, I have enough real ones to think about. A interesting take with this 5 line poem...Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review.
Bless you.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Before going to bed we should keep aside worries, bad thoughts and negative feelings so that when we open our eyes in the morning we feel grateful for another day God has given us to live well. Thoughts are only in our mind which we can control Interesting five-line poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Before going to bed we should keep aside worries, bad thoughts and negative feelings so that when we open our eyes in the morning we feel grateful for another day God has given us to live well. Thoughts are only in our mind which we can control Interesting five-line poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Amen, Thank you for your Review and Comments.
Comment from L. Kalere
It's almost as if we got ahead of ourselves in evolution. Ah, what to do with these brains ... yes, let's make life tough. A malady only man could devise. Nice insight. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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It's almost as if we got ahead of ourselves in evolution. Ah, what to do with these brains ... yes, let's make life tough. A malady only man could devise. Nice insight. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Review.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Somos esclavos', is an extremely well-written piece. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. This extremely thought-provoking piece was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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'Somos esclavos', is an extremely well-written piece. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. This extremely thought-provoking piece was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you your Support is Greatly Appreciated.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Frank Jauregui
(Proverbs 23:7) "For as he thinks in his heart, so is he:" As a pastor at my church I can attest that this is very true. Many people are creators of their own hell. The image you chose is softens the blow of this reality.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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(Proverbs 23:7) "For as he thinks in his heart, so is he:" As a pastor at my church I can attest that this is very true. Many people are creators of their own hell. The image you chose is softens the blow of this reality.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you and God's Blessings for your Support and Comments.
Comment from Patty Cicero
Worries,
Burdens,
Planted in your Mind,
Crying for some attention,
Your Brain's Invention?
*yes many of our problems are only in our head. Its strange how the mind works.
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Worries,
Burdens,
Planted in your Mind,
Crying for some attention,
Your Brain's Invention?
*yes many of our problems are only in our head. Its strange how the mind works.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you, your rating indicates an error in construction or poem formulation. Please advise it would be most helpful.
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It was good, I just felt like it was missing something. Keep writing.