Comment from zanya

Excellent

This ten- line poem illustrates well the dilemma we all face in life about choosing the path that is right for us on our earthly journey 'mystery I try to unravel'

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021

Thank you for your review. I truly appreciate your comments.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

"Just what is this road that I am to travel?
Is the mystery I try to unravel
while I set out on a personal quest to find
just what it is for me that He has in mind." Let the mystery begin:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021

Thank you for your comments and your good luck wish.

Comment from Earl Corp

Exceptional

I believe your words describe how my life is going and I need to seek out his will. Your poem rhymes, makes sense, is spiritual, and reaches the reader emotionally. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021

Thank you ever so much for your review and the generous rating.