Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

A wonderful, image-filled testimony to snow in late spring. It truly does put a damper on the general excitement, and particularly the daffodil trumpets.

Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Gloria :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

A finely written five line poem Contest entry. All syllables are in check to reflect a seasonal piece. Daffodil trumpets shivering with muffled fanfare under snow. - beautifully expressed alongside fitting photo. I really enjoyed this read. ~DD

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021

Thank you for your lovely feedback, DD :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Muffled Fanfare
by Debra White

Hello, Debra,

Great entry for the 5 Line Poem contest.

Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images of flowers. I would recommend it.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Gypsy :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

muffled
fanfare
heralds spring's return -
golden trumpets shiver 'neath
chilly counterpane

what an outstanding writer and you can tell with your experience
I hope for the best in the contest

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Thank you for your comments!
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A magical image here and hopeful spring-filled words to match, albeit a chilly start, those yellow trumpets are not deterred, much enjoyed Debra, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Thanks so much, Dolly, glad you enjoyed :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like the the idea of daffodils with their trumpet-like bells trumpeting which signifies their ability to look like trumpeters making heralding announcement of the coming spring, a great entry in this contest Debra, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Thank you Roy, I appreciate your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)

reply by royowen on 02-Mar-2021

Welcome Debra

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Whimsical imagery--trumpet/herald/fanfare--works to excellent purpose in this form--chilly counterpane is brilliant--a fresh take on the usual blanket of snow. Brilliant title!

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Thanks, Liz, for your kind and enthusiastic feedback!
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It's beautifully written. I like your poem. Excellent work! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Thank you for your kind. D encouraging feedbVk and good luck wishes, Raul :)
I appreciate both!
Best wishes, Debra

reply by Raul1 on 02-Mar-2021

You're welcome!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I reviewed this and then my power went crazy. I'm glad I came back to look again because here it was unreviewed. I find one there's something that we need to read that gives us hope for spring. It's been a severe winter. Hopes of spring sustains us.
Sending me a very best for the contest and some warmth,
Sally XOs...

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Thank you Sal for your lovely feedback :)
I wrote a similar poem (same theme) a couple of days ago, perhaps you were thinking of that one, as you?ve reviewed it...?
Much appreciated, Debra :) x