Salt of the Sea
fight or flight isn't always an easy choice5 total reviews
Comment from amada
Oh, what a great and beautifully written story. It touched me the most because a couple of years ago I almost drawn at the beach. Your descriptions are so similar to what I really experienced. Oh, those calm waves have such a deep caressing pull...
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Oh, what a great and beautifully written story. It touched me the most because a couple of years ago I almost drawn at the beach. Your descriptions are so similar to what I really experienced. Oh, those calm waves have such a deep caressing pull...
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Oh, Amada! Thank you for sharing. I appreciate you touching review.
Patricia
Comment from royowen
Well, those of us who are aufait with the allegorical principle of this, one shouldn't ever look longingly back to Egypt where the meagre blessings of survival are, (or Sodom) but to look forward to where we're going with all its promise attached, the past can't be regained, it's only death back there. Beautifully written my friend and a great principle to remember, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Well, those of us who are aufait with the allegorical principle of this, one shouldn't ever look longingly back to Egypt where the meagre blessings of survival are, (or Sodom) but to look forward to where we're going with all its promise attached, the past can't be regained, it's only death back there. Beautifully written my friend and a great principle to remember, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Roy. I enjoyed your expansion of the "don't look back" theme.
Patricia
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Well done Patricia.
Comment from greyson ernst
that picture is soooooooooooooooooo pretty and you did a good short story are you new here? but anyways keep writing and stay safe have a good good day
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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that picture is soooooooooooooooooo pretty and you did a good short story are you new here? but anyways keep writing and stay safe have a good good day
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thanks again, Greyson Ernst. I appreciate your feedback and six stars.
Patricia
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Spiritual Flash Fiction speaks a tale about Lot's wife defied God's alphas and upon the curse she became a pillar of salt; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this.
The sun was risen upon the earth as Lot's hand (I would like to express this part - the sun rose upon the earth as Lot's hand... )
ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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This Spiritual Flash Fiction speaks a tale about Lot's wife defied God's alphas and upon the curse she became a pillar of salt; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this.
The sun was risen upon the earth as Lot's hand (I would like to express this part - the sun rose upon the earth as Lot's hand... )
ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Al. I appreciate your feedback and suggestion. It's the way it's written in the KJV Bible. I would still consider simplifying, as you suggested, but I would lose my 150-word requirement for the contest.
Thanks again.
Patricia
Comment from Sanku
Lot's wife disobeyed God's order and she became a pillar of salt. You are retelling this story in an interesting way .it is just right for the contest .All the best for the contest
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Lot's wife disobeyed God's order and she became a pillar of salt. You are retelling this story in an interesting way .it is just right for the contest .All the best for the contest
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Sanku. I appreciate your comments.
Patricia