Fun House Mirrors
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a lot of fun this would be to enter into the world of mirrors. I love mirrors and they can serve to make a small apartment into a big one with just the illusion of space, you managed to bring this experience to life here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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What a lot of fun this would be to enter into the world of mirrors. I love mirrors and they can serve to make a small apartment into a big one with just the illusion of space, you managed to bring this experience to life here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
Ok...I can't comment on the actual rondel form because I'm allergic to too many rules. I'll tell you this...this poem rocks!
"A lot of jurors" that's for sure! This has a very interesting perspective and has your readers give some extra thought.
Strong last line and repeating line.
"Everywhere around is just mirrors."
Wishing you luck,
Anna
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Poet,
Ok...I can't comment on the actual rondel form because I'm allergic to too many rules. I'll tell you this...this poem rocks!
"A lot of jurors" that's for sure! This has a very interesting perspective and has your readers give some extra thought.
Strong last line and repeating line.
"Everywhere around is just mirrors."
Wishing you luck,
Anna
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you!