My Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Mud"My life after meeting Jim.
6 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
I mentioned my campervan in the course of my last review. It would have fitted in there easily, but then i didn't have the luxurious living your monster gives you.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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I mentioned my campervan in the course of my last review. It would have fitted in there easily, but then i didn't have the luxurious living your monster gives you.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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LOL, thank you so much Jim for reviewing and your kind comments, yes it is a monster, now that we don't have a large dog I keep suggesting we try something smaller.
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Driving at a lower level you would miss the views. Large dog? I thought you needed enough room to swing a cat!
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LOL the views are indeed splendid. Large dog? We had to have Sallie our 13 year old dog put down last year, so now we just have the 16 year old cat. We were wise enough to not try to introduce another dog until she goes.
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray! I'm so happy that you're continuing your saga from your traveling life! Also, so glad you can get your medical appointments, too. What an ordeal to face so much mud in one day. I hope you get a refund!
Some comments:
parked it in the neighbors drive. (neigbor's)
This sentence confused me a little.
We hooked up the car and [were] on our way.
were we will handle (where)
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Hooray! I'm so happy that you're continuing your saga from your traveling life! Also, so glad you can get your medical appointments, too. What an ordeal to face so much mud in one day. I hope you get a refund!
Some comments:
parked it in the neighbors drive. (neigbor's)
This sentence confused me a little.
We hooked up the car and [were] on our way.
were we will handle (where)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much Helen for reading, reviewing and your great comments. It is our hope as well. I will fix those in a few moments. Hugs.
Comment from poetwatch
I thouth that all ladies liked mud, Alie, why I"ve seen it smeared on their faces and seen them wrestle in that slimy wet dirt. :) Yet, I know what it means to get stuck and no matter how hard you try to get out it still embraces you in it's muddy arms. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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I thouth that all ladies liked mud, Alie, why I"ve seen it smeared on their faces and seen them wrestle in that slimy wet dirt. :) Yet, I know what it means to get stuck and no matter how hard you try to get out it still embraces you in it's muddy arms. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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LOL, well I personally dislike mud, yuk. Thank you so much Jose for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from robyn corum
Alie,
How on earth could the park owner or manager mistake a pull-through for a backing-in? Answer -- they couldn't. They just didn't care? That is so frustrating. You know they know their campers have come a long way and are ready to park and CHILL. Ugh. And then to not answer their calls or even be present when y'all arrived? I mean I understand there's not always someone there - but it still makes me mad for y'all. Probably more mad than y'all were. hahaha
Notes:
1.) the now empty site next to ours and ask(ed if) we could have some in our site.
2.) Of course, it rained overnight on Friday, but then when had it not been raining.
--> can you edit to make this more clear?
3.) And as a side note, I always advise people to 'tell it in order'. This piece starts out kinda crooked. So far, you are not telling things in order and it makes for a compromised story and an easily confused reader. Just a thought?
4.) We hooked up the car and (got) on our way.
--> but wouldn't you have hooked up the camper, too?
5.) Then he called other par(k)s in the area, most were booked up
Thanks. I'm so glad you have a kind heart and a great sense of humor. Hugs-
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Alie,
How on earth could the park owner or manager mistake a pull-through for a backing-in? Answer -- they couldn't. They just didn't care? That is so frustrating. You know they know their campers have come a long way and are ready to park and CHILL. Ugh. And then to not answer their calls or even be present when y'all arrived? I mean I understand there's not always someone there - but it still makes me mad for y'all. Probably more mad than y'all were. hahaha
Notes:
1.) the now empty site next to ours and ask(ed if) we could have some in our site.
2.) Of course, it rained overnight on Friday, but then when had it not been raining.
--> can you edit to make this more clear?
3.) And as a side note, I always advise people to 'tell it in order'. This piece starts out kinda crooked. So far, you are not telling things in order and it makes for a compromised story and an easily confused reader. Just a thought?
4.) We hooked up the car and (got) on our way.
--> but wouldn't you have hooked up the camper, too?
5.) Then he called other par(k)s in the area, most were booked up
Thanks. I'm so glad you have a kind heart and a great sense of humor. Hugs-
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you Robyn for reading, reviewing and your great comments. For the record Jim was cussing up a storm inside the rig. I will fix those in a moment.
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I have to think so. Otherwise, that man is a saint! hahaha
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, man and you maintained your cool, that 's amazing, probably I will be swearing and threatening left and right:) but you manage to go through the "mud" and make a story about:)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Wow, man and you maintained your cool, that 's amazing, probably I will be swearing and threatening left and right:) but you manage to go through the "mud" and make a story about:)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much Iza for reading, reviewing and your great comments. LOL shhh my husband was the one cussing but I am a firm believer that poop happens or in this case-mud and I carry a big shovel. lol.
Comment from royowen
It's a horrid thing mud, we were once caught up to our axles in the usual desert, outback regions of Australia, but thanks to the bushcraft talent of our friends, we escaped after torrential rain, (rarely happens out there) so I know what it's like, well done, great adventure. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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It's a horrid thing mud, we were once caught up to our axles in the usual desert, outback regions of Australia, but thanks to the bushcraft talent of our friends, we escaped after torrential rain, (rarely happens out there) so I know what it's like, well done, great adventure. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much Roy for reading, reviewing and sharing your horrors. Blessings.
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Well done