Forever
A Love poem not using the word love45 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize for this stunning poem. Show vs tell--brilliant. Vivid imagery, spot-on for the theme--dazzling sun fell to its death--stars in disarray. Fine work. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Congrats on your prize for this stunning poem. Show vs tell--brilliant. Vivid imagery, spot-on for the theme--dazzling sun fell to its death--stars in disarray. Fine work. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you a Elizabeth for your kind review and congrats. I truly appreciate both.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Ella3020
Wow..thats was deeply thought ..and very well put ..without using the word love you really let it out ..i dont believe may could do thatthe way you did there...very awesome and touching
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Wow..thats was deeply thought ..and very well put ..without using the word love you really let it out ..i dont believe may could do thatthe way you did there...very awesome and touching
Comment Written 04-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you Ella for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Teri7
I wish I had six stars to give you for this beautiful and well written love poem without using the word love. You used very good descriptive and loving words. The art work you chose goes so nicely with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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I wish I had six stars to give you for this beautiful and well written love poem without using the word love. You used very good descriptive and loving words. The art work you chose goes so nicely with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you Teri for this lovely review, for the good wishes and the virtual six. I greatly appreciate it..
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful poem for the contest. I like what you said about wanting to show your love rather than just say it. That makes it so much more special. Hope you have many years together.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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What a beautiful poem for the contest. I like what you said about wanting to show your love rather than just say it. That makes it so much more special. Hope you have many years together.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you Ann for this lovely review and for you continued encouragement of my writing.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome, Janet
Comment from DonandVicki
What a loving tribute to your husband. I will bet that he frames this or keeps this close to his heart. Some times we do not need special words like "Love" to express how we feel.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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What a loving tribute to your husband. I will bet that he frames this or keeps this close to his heart. Some times we do not need special words like "Love" to express how we feel.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review. It is in a frame on his desk. :))
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Modus Mos
Felt every emotion on every word, the rhyme pattern though simple is used as a sniper, on point and precise. These words you used, is a delight to read, as if I am reading a old romantic sonet. Beautiful, Thank you for the romantic read.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Felt every emotion on every word, the rhyme pattern though simple is used as a sniper, on point and precise. These words you used, is a delight to read, as if I am reading a old romantic sonet. Beautiful, Thank you for the romantic read.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review. Comparing it to an old romantic sonnet - I am honored.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from lance michaels
What a wonderful poem! My wife and I are separated right now, but your poem brought tears to my eyes thinking how I wish her and I were still together. I'm not doing very well without her.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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What a wonderful poem! My wife and I are separated right now, but your poem brought tears to my eyes thinking how I wish her and I were still together. I'm not doing very well without her.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you Lance for this lovely review. I am so sorry to hear about you and your wife. I hope and pray it will work out. Sometimes just saying "I'm sorry" even if it wasn't your fault will start the healing.
Blessings
Janet
Blessings
Janet
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You are very right! Thank you.
Comment from QC Poet
Interesting concept to try to write a love poem without using the word in it going to have to give it a try. I'd personally have a few questions if my wife wife and read a poem to me that contains my pass tense life stated in it. LOL. Thank you for sharing your poem and Congratulations to you both.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Interesting concept to try to write a love poem without using the word in it going to have to give it a try. I'd personally have a few questions if my wife wife and read a poem to me that contains my pass tense life stated in it. LOL. Thank you for sharing your poem and Congratulations to you both.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this thoughtful review.
The think the past tense part comes from the world situation - the pandemic - the uncertainty of everyday - and our mortality. We often play the "what if" game with each other and maybe that's where the idea came from.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very nice love poem. Your love for your husband shines throughout the poem. Like the last line the bestBut if you stay with me and hold my hand -
together we'd remember how to run.
To share our lives forever was the plan --
and mold our many fragments into one.
Our destiny - will always intertwine.
Forever - I am yours and you are mine.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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very nice love poem. Your love for your husband shines throughout the poem. Like the last line the bestBut if you stay with me and hold my hand -
together we'd remember how to run.
To share our lives forever was the plan --
and mold our many fragments into one.
Our destiny - will always intertwine.
Forever - I am yours and you are mine.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you Jake for this lovely review. So please that you liked it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Vanna1
Good ending. Good presentation. I like your flow and the words are peaceful. You followed the criteria well. I like the emotion and the color visuals with the grey and the sun. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Good ending. Good presentation. I like your flow and the words are peaceful. You followed the criteria well. I like the emotion and the color visuals with the grey and the sun. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you Vanna for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet