Haiku 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "A Frosty Reception"Haiku Club Submissions 2021
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The daffodils are always eager to parade their golden skirts and announce spring is here, they are a delight and you brought the scene here Debra, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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The daffodils are always eager to parade their golden skirts and announce spring is here, they are a delight and you brought the scene here Debra, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Lulube
That's a good question. I am guessing, but I'd say no, not needed, final answer. lol there are no capitals at the beginning of lines so that already breaks the format with Capitals, let me know if there are any other answers? but I can say definitely good imagery and sad but true, premature.
lulube
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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That's a good question. I am guessing, but I'd say no, not needed, final answer. lol there are no capitals at the beginning of lines so that already breaks the format with Capitals, let me know if there are any other answers? but I can say definitely good imagery and sad but true, premature.
lulube
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, lulube, for your definitive answer to my pondering LOL!
Best wishes, Debra :)
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lol welcome
lulube
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Fabulous! Brilliant from top to tail--witty title--clever wordplay: trumpets herald--premature fanfare. Many will be relieved to see this is not a contest entry!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Fabulous! Brilliant from top to tail--witty title--clever wordplay: trumpets herald--premature fanfare. Many will be relieved to see this is not a contest entry!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Liz, for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Gloria ....
It is always a bit of a drag when a wee bit of frost gets stuck in one's trumpet. This is a fine haiku, Debra and just right to bring a little sprightly spring into our step.
A most enjoyable read today. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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It is always a bit of a drag when a wee bit of frost gets stuck in one's trumpet. This is a fine haiku, Debra and just right to bring a little sprightly spring into our step.
A most enjoyable read today. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Hi Gloria, thank you for your lovely comments :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written winter haiku. Golden trumpets herald springs arrival. Premature fan fare. This is a Beautiful photo to go with your words.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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This is a nicely written winter haiku. Golden trumpets herald springs arrival. Premature fan fare. This is a Beautiful photo to go with your words.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Sally Law
Looks great to me and so well said. It been a severe winter for the records and the flowers just now peeking. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Looks great to me and so well said. It been a severe winter for the records and the flowers just now peeking. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Sal, for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Mark D. R.
Debra,
No matter, springtime will soon be here!
Yes, the snow and cold weather can really put the kibosh on the early arrival of those buttercups. But your verse gives us hope that Spring can bring us new life.
Nice photo and good addition to the collection.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Debra,
No matter, springtime will soon be here!
Yes, the snow and cold weather can really put the kibosh on the early arrival of those buttercups. But your verse gives us hope that Spring can bring us new life.
Nice photo and good addition to the collection.
Mark
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Mark, for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Frosty Reception
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Excellent Late Winter Haiku for our club event. Beautiful entry with great imagery and presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the satori, it's clever... the trumpet flower also means a musical instrument to welcome spring.... well done!!!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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A Frosty Reception
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Excellent Late Winter Haiku for our club event. Beautiful entry with great imagery and presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the satori, it's clever... the trumpet flower also means a musical instrument to welcome spring.... well done!!!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Gypsy :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your haiku is descriptive and well-presented, Debra. The image is perfect. Great job with the style of haiku. I believe the word 'spring' could be either upper or lower case. To me, it is fine as written--naming a season, but not using it as a name, although that is possible in writing. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Your haiku is descriptive and well-presented, Debra. The image is perfect. Great job with the style of haiku. I believe the word 'spring' could be either upper or lower case. To me, it is fine as written--naming a season, but not using it as a name, although that is possible in writing. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Jan, for your helpful feedback. I appreciate it :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from donette1914
it amazes me how great of a writer you truly are and I am honored to read your work
very interesting writing as we are drawn in
so creative and original
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with a well penned poem
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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it amazes me how great of a writer you truly are and I am honored to read your work
very interesting writing as we are drawn in
so creative and original
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with a well penned poem
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
