The Ultimate Gift
Thanking God for His Many Blessings2 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Wow! Poet,
This is an esquisite poem and entry for the gratitude prompt!
The flower metaphor works powerfully here. I like the alliteration
here in this line:
"A day filled with potential and promise"
Impacting ending:
"Your presence is everywhere to be seen and I revel in it
As my day fades into the twilight
I extract the last bit of fragrance
And return it to You as an evening sacrifice"
You should probably add an 's' for plural of blessing in the following line:
"For the many blessing*"
Good luck! Looks like a winner to me,
Anna
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Wow! Poet,
This is an esquisite poem and entry for the gratitude prompt!
The flower metaphor works powerfully here. I like the alliteration
here in this line:
"A day filled with potential and promise"
Impacting ending:
"Your presence is everywhere to be seen and I revel in it
As my day fades into the twilight
I extract the last bit of fragrance
And return it to You as an evening sacrifice"
You should probably add an 's' for plural of blessing in the following line:
"For the many blessing*"
Good luck! Looks like a winner to me,
Anna
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Julie Sandy
Beautiful poem of gratitude, I love the words you have chosen very uplifting and positive, like a prayer.
Thank you for sharing
Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Beautiful poem of gratitude, I love the words you have chosen very uplifting and positive, like a prayer.
Thank you for sharing
Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
