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Time Travel poetry contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You had me going up until you only went one week ahead and only to see if you won a small contest...Really?!?! This is clever, I must say, and it is about time. But, I would use a time machine for much loftier gain, for me and most of all, for mankind!
Thanks for the time travel, and good luck with the contest, although you already know, right?
Take care,
Jesse
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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You had me going up until you only went one week ahead and only to see if you won a small contest...Really?!?! This is clever, I must say, and it is about time. But, I would use a time machine for much loftier gain, for me and most of all, for mankind!
Thanks for the time travel, and good luck with the contest, although you already know, right?
Take care,
Jesse
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Jesse. Yeah, it seems he is traded being able to change something serious for just the results of this contest. Lol.
I really appreciate the generous stars, friend
I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
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You are very welcome!
And, good luck with the contest!
Jesse
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Choice
Great entry for the Time Travel Poetry contest. I love the movies of time travel. You described the process of time travel. Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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The Choice
Great entry for the Time Travel Poetry contest. I love the movies of time travel. You described the process of time travel. Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Gypsy. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If only we could go back in time at that very moment that the virus broke out and stopped it in its tracks, we wouldn't be struggling right now. There are a few disasters I would change in life, but this would be the biggest one for me right now. An inventive and interesting write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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If only we could go back in time at that very moment that the virus broke out and stopped it in its tracks, we wouldn't be struggling right now. There are a few disasters I would change in life, but this would be the biggest one for me right now. An inventive and interesting write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dolly. I was going to mention a couple things in there but it was already lengthy enough so I just left then out. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again.
Comment from GE Parson
Very interest ing poem. It is amazing how time flys past us, when we look back at were we have been an what we have done in our short life time, We try tp project our self ahead to where we want to be and what we want to be, and some times we succeed and sometimes we don't
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Very interest ing poem. It is amazing how time flys past us, when we look back at were we have been an what we have done in our short life time, We try tp project our self ahead to where we want to be and what we want to be, and some times we succeed and sometimes we don't
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the great review, GE. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from GE Parson
Very interest ing poem. It is amazing how time flys past us, when we look back at were we have been an what we have done in our short life time, We try tp project our self ahead to where we want to be and what we want to be, and some times we succeed and sometimes we don't
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Very interest ing poem. It is amazing how time flys past us, when we look back at were we have been an what we have done in our short life time, We try tp project our self ahead to where we want to be and what we want to be, and some times we succeed and sometimes we don't
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very amusing and it seems to have a good rhythm. I'm no poet so I can't know if it follows and rules, but it appeals to me with lots of heart. Since you know it, I don't need to say good luck with this in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Very amusing and it seems to have a good rhythm. I'm no poet so I can't know if it follows and rules, but it appeals to me with lots of heart. Since you know it, I don't need to say good luck with this in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Carol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant! Wickedly wry humor on wasting your one chance at fixing the ills of the world to finding out whether you won this contest! Well, since you found out you did--congrats.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Brilliant! Wickedly wry humor on wasting your one chance at fixing the ills of the world to finding out whether you won this contest! Well, since you found out you did--congrats.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Elizabeth. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from LyndaS
...An ad popped up across the screen... HAHA! So you sacrificed mankind's future (or past) for some lousy member gold? HAHA! This is a great entry into this contest, author. It's a fine little story in a poem and it is very funny. It's well written with a cool pic to go with it. Very creative and outside the box which is my favorite. Contest winnerrrrrrrrrrr. lol Well done!!!!! Lynda
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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...An ad popped up across the screen... HAHA! So you sacrificed mankind's future (or past) for some lousy member gold? HAHA! This is a great entry into this contest, author. It's a fine little story in a poem and it is very funny. It's well written with a cool pic to go with it. Very creative and outside the box which is my favorite. Contest winnerrrrrrrrrrr. lol Well done!!!!! Lynda
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Lol. You're the only one to mention the ad reference. Thank you for the great review and big sixer, Lynda. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this ridiculous piece. I hope you have a great day.
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Any thyme. Yep I plan on having a very nice day. Great piece, killer of humanity. Haha!
Comment from RodG
You have a wonderful sense of humor, Poet. Your poem had me hooked from beginning to end. The serious half made me ponder which direction in time I'd go if I had a time machine. Congratulations on the win to come.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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You have a wonderful sense of humor, Poet. Your poem had me hooked from beginning to end. The serious half made me ponder which direction in time I'd go if I had a time machine. Congratulations on the win to come.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Rod. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked my silly take on the contest.
Comment from zanya
It's a wonderful humorous touch to the idea of Time travel and where it may take us and what we may discover -who knows where it may lead maybe to 'just a prompt on travelled time'!!!!!
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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It's a wonderful humorous touch to the idea of Time travel and where it may take us and what we may discover -who knows where it may lead maybe to 'just a prompt on travelled time'!!!!!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Zanya. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
