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a long way from home

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This 15 syllable poem, contest entry, speaks the fact poetically, Perseverance the Rover and the Ingenuity the robotic helicopter after the journey landed on Martian surface recently; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
    Thanks for the kind words, Craig
Comment from Sanku
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It can have double meaning .The direct meaning of the sentence is one and the other is that two great qualities are no longer to be found in the common people. I liked it .all the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
    Yep, you got my meaning. Thanks for the kind words and good wishes. Craig
Comment from prodigal
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Not much more inspiring these days than what's going on off planet. Let's hope we kept a little ingenuity here for ourselves as well.

Well done. Sam

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
    A very little :) Thanks for the kind words. Craig
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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CD - this is a clever play of words for the fifteen syllables poem contest. I wonder what will come of the information found from the experimental journey made to the martian surface... Good luck in the contest. ~DD

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
    I hope they find something exciting, otherwise their will be clamouring over the expense of it all. Thanks, DD, for the kind words and good wishes. Craig
Comment from Pantygynt
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I suspect this is a somewhat tongue in cheek statement if the normal meaning of these words, as opposed to their use as proper nouns, is considered, for if they have what hope can there be for the future?

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
    They can't have completely left the planet, as the mission itself shows. But I suspect that, like water on Mars, they are in short supply. Thanks PG.