Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 106 "All Locked Up"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
2 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is an excellent topic. Vitamin D is needed for our bones and not getting out in the Sun is starving our bodies. But the ones we must watch are the children who need to grow. I wonder if many parents have thought of that and are giving them supplements. Thanks for this.
Ralf
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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This is an excellent topic. Vitamin D is needed for our bones and not getting out in the Sun is starving our bodies. But the ones we must watch are the children who need to grow. I wonder if many parents have thought of that and are giving them supplements. Thanks for this.
Ralf
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Thanks, Raffaelina.
Comment from Pantygynt
I am not at all clear about this. Perhaps it is me, but did you mean it cannot beget poor young things. As it is written at the moment it makes no sense - at least not to me. The tenses seem all mixed up.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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I am not at all clear about this. Perhaps it is me, but did you mean it cannot beget poor young things. As it is written at the moment it makes no sense - at least not to me. The tenses seem all mixed up.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2021
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Yeah, I probably will try to revise this poem sometime. After I get my chores done. Thank you for the review!!!
