Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Kabuki Geisha"multi-author book number two
5 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a very well 5-7-5 regan.
(Rich in Theme and Imagery)
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues
Complete Synopsis:
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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This is a very well 5-7-5 regan.
(Rich in Theme and Imagery)
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues
Complete Synopsis:
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
You created a beautiful geisha image with a bunch of f-letter alliterations. Artwork and colors combine for a nice overall presentation for your Renga collaboration.
Mark
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Gypsy,
You created a beautiful geisha image with a bunch of f-letter alliterations. Artwork and colors combine for a nice overall presentation for your Renga collaboration.
Mark
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Hello Mark
In renga you can have alliteration. It's not like haiku... it's more like a 5/7/5.
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Gloria ....
So beautiful this fragile butterfly. The Japanese masters of the arts are delicate beauties, and apparently undergoing unpleasant changes because of COVID.
Let us hope these butterflies survive and thrive.
Always an exquisite presentation and write from your quill my friend. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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So beautiful this fragile butterfly. The Japanese masters of the arts are delicate beauties, and apparently undergoing unpleasant changes because of COVID.
Let us hope these butterflies survive and thrive.
Always an exquisite presentation and write from your quill my friend. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Hello, Gloria, I didn't know about covid and geishas...that's horrible.Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Fragile, flutter, beautiful butterfly:) I love the musicality of these words that give an air of mystery to the entire poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and this book.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Fragile, flutter, beautiful butterfly:) I love the musicality of these words that give an air of mystery to the entire poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and this book.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Those geishas were very well trained to know how to entertain as well as be smart and graceful. I liked all your alliteration and the metaphor of the "fragile butterfly" for these ladies with such fragile lives.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Those geishas were very well trained to know how to entertain as well as be smart and graceful. I liked all your alliteration and the metaphor of the "fragile butterfly" for these ladies with such fragile lives.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much, Helen, I appreciate your review.
Gypsy