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Acrostic, contest submission
2 total reviews
Comment from
Mary Vigasin
I enjoyed this as it reminds me of nights long ago when we would lay in the grass at night and watch the fireflies.
I love the last line about having no cord or batteries when our world is now connected by either or.
Good work and thank for the read.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
Thank you for your kind compliments and the review. It is appreciated. Hugs.
Comment from
equestrik
Fireflys provide a bit of magic to life-i love them and miss them, we don't have them in Utah. You did a good ob with this presentation and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
Thank you. It's funny, I didn't realize till I was well into adulthood that fire flies weren't everywhere. Sorry for your loss. Hugs.
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