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Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "Airshow Relief"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from AnnaLinda
QC Poet,
Well, it seems if anyone could write a really great 15 sylllable poem/entry on this subject, it would be you. You've stated a lot in those few words.
I especially find your second line very telling in a poetic and coded way.
Your notes are appreciated. Sorry you hold that burden as to effect your
health. Can you do an interview?
"Holding "Don't tell Secrets" May end up giving us stressful
life issues that we then turn to destructive ways to deal with it."
I listen and or read Dave Hodges from the Common Sense Show.
His dad worked in top secret space programs and has since passed
away. Now that Dave's mom has also passed away he is free to
discuss some of the things his dad had disclosed to him.
This is a fine entry and I like all of the photos you shared as well.
Anna
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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QC Poet,
Well, it seems if anyone could write a really great 15 sylllable poem/entry on this subject, it would be you. You've stated a lot in those few words.
I especially find your second line very telling in a poetic and coded way.
Your notes are appreciated. Sorry you hold that burden as to effect your
health. Can you do an interview?
"Holding "Don't tell Secrets" May end up giving us stressful
life issues that we then turn to destructive ways to deal with it."
I listen and or read Dave Hodges from the Common Sense Show.
His dad worked in top secret space programs and has since passed
away. Now that Dave's mom has also passed away he is free to
discuss some of the things his dad had disclosed to him.
This is a fine entry and I like all of the photos you shared as well.
Anna
Comment Written 03-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you and God Bless you for your Support, Time to Read, Rate, and Reviewing this poem offering.
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Same to you!
Comment from ESOSTINE
That was an interesting piece for the 15 syllable poem contest entry. I could imagine the burden of holding secrets for years, burdens and secrets that finally get buried with man's last breath. Good job, QC! Thanks for letting us have a glimpse into your life. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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That was an interesting piece for the 15 syllable poem contest entry. I could imagine the burden of holding secrets for years, burdens and secrets that finally get buried with man's last breath. Good job, QC! Thanks for letting us have a glimpse into your life. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Intriguing piece! Stunning imagery--screaming secrets--notes appreciated for context--fine basis for a prose post. You clearly can say much on this subject!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Intriguing piece! Stunning imagery--screaming secrets--notes appreciated for context--fine basis for a prose post. You clearly can say much on this subject!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Thank you for Reading Rating and Reviewing this poem offering.
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi QC. A unique entry. Well done on this well- written verse. I enjoy reading verses that are meaningful and this one is something I can relate to. We are a retired military family and keeping those secrets was always a heavy load for Hubby. Thank you for your service, and good luck in the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Hi QC. A unique entry. Well done on this well- written verse. I enjoy reading verses that are meaningful and this one is something I can relate to. We are a retired military family and keeping those secrets was always a heavy load for Hubby. Thank you for your service, and good luck in the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Support. Though I fabricated many parts for Classified Military projects it was not even Considered as Civil Service. My grandson just got home after 6yrs in the USAF last Feb. as Covid 19 struck unfortunately. Bless you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form--the syllable count is correct first off. The image is a good pairing with your descriptive words. Your notes are informative, too. I always enjoy the air show. I like the POV you give air shows from one who has been there, done that. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Your contest entry is in good form--the syllable count is correct first off. The image is a good pairing with your descriptive words. Your notes are informative, too. I always enjoy the air show. I like the POV you give air shows from one who has been there, done that. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Encouragement. Bless you.
Comment from Boogienights
Interesting poem. I've never been to an airshow but I have the "screaming" you mention..it's incredible. What secrets can aircraft hold? That's a mystery. Well written and intriguing...Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Interesting poem. I've never been to an airshow but I have the "screaming" you mention..it's incredible. What secrets can aircraft hold? That's a mystery. Well written and intriguing...Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Bless you and Thank you for your Support.
Comment from RetroStarfish
This is an interesting take on the contest. I never thought about military jets having secret burdens - but of course that makes perfect sense.
Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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This is an interesting take on the contest. I never thought about military jets having secret burdens - but of course that makes perfect sense.
Well done!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Reviewing this poem offering.
Comment from equestrik
This is a really heartfelt and good presentation and entry for the 15 syllable poem contest. There is a lot of pain for so many with these secrets. Good writing. All the best to you and thank you for your service.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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This is a really heartfelt and good presentation and entry for the 15 syllable poem contest. There is a lot of pain for so many with these secrets. Good writing. All the best to you and thank you for your service.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the Kind Reviewing of this poem offering. I'll pass on the Thanks to my USAF Grandson just got home as Covid 19 hit. Bless you.
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Thank you!
Comment from country ranch writer
Never got to go to air shows but I have been aboard the USSAlabama while inviting my aunt in the summer time. Went to visit my oldest brother stationed on and got to seen a lot of military stuff in 1959. It was interesting to say the least.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Never got to go to air shows but I have been aboard the USSAlabama while inviting my aunt in the summer time. Went to visit my oldest brother stationed on and got to seen a lot of military stuff in 1959. It was interesting to say the least.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the Review, the 40s on up are very innovating and development times.
Comment from dragonpoet
The artwork matches will with the theme of the poem. It seems the honor everything to do with military flying.
The poem reminds us of the sound of war and the sounds of the airplanes flying past.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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The artwork matches will with the theme of the poem. It seems the honor everything to do with military flying.
The poem reminds us of the sound of war and the sounds of the airplanes flying past.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
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Thanks for Reviewing this poem offering. Blessings to you.
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Youu're welcome.
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