Reviews from

God Created Her Twice.

My Girl Is So Nice...

3 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I wish I was like my mother .. she was beautiful, she was intelligent , an artist ( dancer, painter and sculptor) ..there was nothing she could not achieve ..

I CANT ..... or ......IT S TOO HARD ... ... were words that did not exist in her vocabulary.

I 'm a poor copy of my her, Rhonnie(sigh)

I do love the poem you wrote despite it's not the truth.

Had I spent more time with my mamma, i would have had a bigger chance to walk in her steps...

of the 44 years she lived after she gave birth to me, only 14 years were spent with my mother ..

the first 20 years.... which are the most important... I practically never saw my parents.

I'm giving this poem a 6 star review for the warm sentiment with which you wrote it.


Take care Rhonnie ( 4 leaf clover! )

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
    CIAO TEMPEST: I humbly beg your pardon. But I beg to differ here. I can tell a tree by the fruit that it bears. You, ARE like your mother, my best friend. Don't take my word for it. Take our God's word for it. Our God said: "Let the earth bring forth grass, the herb that yield seed, and the fruit tree that yields fruit according to it's kind, whose seed is in itself on the earth." And it was so. Tempeste, if a mother sheep gives birth to her baby lamb, and the lamb is separated from her until it has grown up...does not that lamb still be a sheep, thanks to Momma. Tempest...let's just call you, "Little Thea." Fact about it...that's who you are. You are a perfect copy of your mother. And that's the truth. You spent the first nine months of your life in your mother...and that was all you needed to be just like her. I'm giving your review a six star reply
    for the warm sentiment with which you wrote it. (biggrin) Take care, Tempeste. Good will to you too. Your friend. rhonnie69.
Comment from R56Ma3
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

That was a very nice written piece as well as very creative! You used feeling and love about someone special in your life. I enjoyed reading it it was very well done! R56ma3

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This poem speaks about her beauty; she was born to be copy of her mother, so beautiful like as named a rose, sure God must have created her twice; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021