Grandchildren Complete My World
Grandchildren are a bright spot that warms the heart andsoul6 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the card and wordings on the card.
Your poem is right. Grandchildren is the best gift from God.
I like your poem: "Grandchildren is love. Fill one's life with endless joys. Indescribable..."
They is beyond description.
Enjoy your grandchildren.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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I like the card and wordings on the card.
Your poem is right. Grandchildren is the best gift from God.
I like your poem: "Grandchildren is love. Fill one's life with endless joys. Indescribable..."
They is beyond description.
Enjoy your grandchildren.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I would change the first line to: "Grandchildren are loved" for the sake of grammar and the contest, I adored the sentiments and I feel the same about my own, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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I would change the first line to: "Grandchildren are loved" for the sake of grammar and the contest, I adored the sentiments and I feel the same about my own, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from equestrik
In the first line it seems that is should be are but you may have a reason for your choice. Good visual and a well composed write for te writing prompt. All the best to you.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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In the first line it seems that is should be are but you may have a reason for your choice. Good visual and a well composed write for te writing prompt. All the best to you.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your words are well-chosen and speak volumes about the bond with grandparent and child)ren).
May I suggest ~
I would use quotation marks around the word "Grandchildren"
as I read it as written, I wanted to say the word 'are' instead of 'is' since grandchildren is plural.
Even better maybe say "Grandchildren" mean love . . .
I know this is your choice. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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You did a good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your words are well-chosen and speak volumes about the bond with grandparent and child)ren).
May I suggest ~
I would use quotation marks around the word "Grandchildren"
as I read it as written, I wanted to say the word 'are' instead of 'is' since grandchildren is plural.
Even better maybe say "Grandchildren" mean love . . .
I know this is your choice. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Wendy G
I really enjoy the expression of your joy and fulfilment with this poem on joy.
(May I suggest that you choose plural verbs to go with the plural 'grandchildren'? e.g "Grandchildren bring love, fill one's life ..." )
The quote you give in the image is delightful. Good wishes for your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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I really enjoy the expression of your joy and fulfilment with this poem on joy.
(May I suggest that you choose plural verbs to go with the plural 'grandchildren'? e.g "Grandchildren bring love, fill one's life ..." )
The quote you give in the image is delightful. Good wishes for your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you
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Not sure which line your referring to is it instead of grandchildren is love. Grandchildren bring love?
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Yes, that is just a suggestion. (Because 'grandchildren' is plural whereas 'is' refers to just one person.) Good wishes.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the topic.
-You show how special
grandchildren are filling
life with joy.
-A very good closing line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the topic.
-You show how special
grandchildren are filling
life with joy.
-A very good closing line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
