The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "My Bro the Crow"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form. I like the end rhyme. Your words read smooth and are filled with great imagery of your father. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Your image is a great representation of Native Americans, too.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Your contest entry is in good form. I like the end rhyme. Your words read smooth and are filled with great imagery of your father. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Your image is a great representation of Native Americans, too.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you and God's Blessings to you.
Comment from RShipp
What an interesting story behind your poem.
I have heard of crows being seen as messengers before.
Your told your story concisely in your three lines.
Best of luck in the Three Line Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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What an interesting story behind your poem.
I have heard of crows being seen as messengers before.
Your told your story concisely in your three lines.
Best of luck in the Three Line Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Time to Read, Rate, and for Reviewing this poem offering
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think we have the same perception about the crow, if you see one something is going to die. I appreciate the melody for your offering for the contest: "Friends Called Him the Crow!
Shared a Story He Did Know,
A Father's Legend Still Grows!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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I think we have the same perception about the crow, if you see one something is going to die. I appreciate the melody for your offering for the contest: "Friends Called Him the Crow!
Shared a Story He Did Know,
A Father's Legend Still Grows!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Your Continued Support and Encouragement is Greatly Appreciated.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 3 Line Poetry Contest Entry speaks eloquently about a friend of yours, people called him the Crow, whose story you shared as you find he still grows his father's legend; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. Wish you best of luck. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This 3 Line Poetry Contest Entry speaks eloquently about a friend of yours, people called him the Crow, whose story you shared as you find he still grows his father's legend; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. Wish you best of luck. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Time to Read and Rating this poem offering. It is really about my Eldest Brother and forwarding that legend to my Grandkids.Blessings to you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We often have legends based on bird behaviour and I understand this because birds are intuitive and know much more about what is going to happen than humans, your Father sounds like a wise man, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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We often have legends based on bird behaviour and I understand this because birds are intuitive and know much more about what is going to happen than humans, your Father sounds like a wise man, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Continued Support and Guidance, with your Valued Reviewing. Really a part of my Native side I'm gathering stories to share and write about. Bless you for your Review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This three-line poem, My Bro the Crow, presented as a 5-7-7, carries on the idea that oral history and legends can be powerful when the connections between messengers are so close.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This three-line poem, My Bro the Crow, presented as a 5-7-7, carries on the idea that oral history and legends can be powerful when the connections between messengers are so close.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Bless you for you Valued Reviewing and Continued Support.
He was a big influence on me. Blessings.
Comment from country ranch writer
They used to hang nicknames on tribal members like the crows.Indian story's handed down threw the years are pretty darn interesting. Search for them and you might like them.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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They used to hang nicknames on tribal members like the crows.Indian story's handed down threw the years are pretty darn interesting. Search for them and you might like them.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Bless you for your Continued Support and Encouragement.
Yes, these type of Legends are among my favorites. Thank you for Reviewing.