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A Tyburn Poem7 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Excellent!
A beautifully penned 'Tyburn Poem.'
Complying with all of the requirements listed.
Message of challenge in the chosen words
Self reflecting questions to be answered.
Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Excellent!
A beautifully penned 'Tyburn Poem.'
Complying with all of the requirements listed.
Message of challenge in the chosen words
Self reflecting questions to be answered.
Well done!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
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Wow! thank you very much, I enjoyed the challenge of this form it took a few attempts but your wonderful comments, review, and stars tell me I am on the right track, very much appreciated****kahpot
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All the best!
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All the best!
Comment from Pantygynt
This looks to me like Mother Teresa and the Tyburn poem you have written is both clever and appropriate as well as involving multi syllable rhyme. It is a very good entry.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This looks to me like Mother Teresa and the Tyburn poem you have written is both clever and appropriate as well as involving multi syllable rhyme. It is a very good entry.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written tyburn poem. Great descriptive words. You've chosen an Excellent photo to go with your words. Very Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This is a nicely written tyburn poem. Great descriptive words. You've chosen an Excellent photo to go with your words. Very Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Myra Allen
This is an excellent poem. It uses the format requested in an evocative way. The artwork works well. The title is a great one. Belief is a great subject and well executed.
Kind regards
Myra
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This is an excellent poem. It uses the format requested in an evocative way. The artwork works well. The title is a great one. Belief is a great subject and well executed.
Kind regards
Myra
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Susan Newell
Sorry I have to give you a four. The rules call for the last two lines to rhyme, and I think that's the most difficult part. Better see if you can edit it, because it is likely to be disqualified.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Sorry I have to give you a four. The rules call for the last two lines to rhyme, and I think that's the most difficult part. Better see if you can edit it, because it is likely to be disqualified.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you, never be sorry for doing what your heart tells you, many thanks for the heads up, much appreciated
Comment from Wendy G
I like this poem as it is well thought through. However the word "received" is spelt wrongly twice and it would be good to correct it. (The general rule is "i before e, EXCEPT after c" when it is "e before i".)
I do like the theme of being taken from darkness into light, with relief following, a spiritual journey finishing with faith, and being found.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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I like this poem as it is well thought through. However the word "received" is spelt wrongly twice and it would be good to correct it. (The general rule is "i before e, EXCEPT after c" when it is "e before i".)
I do like the theme of being taken from darkness into light, with relief following, a spiritual journey finishing with faith, and being found.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much, I will have to get a new spelling helper as you can see I'm not much good at that, much appreciated
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Good wishes to you. English is a horrid language in regards to spelling!
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Many thanks
Comment from lancellot
This is very well crafted. I looked into this contest but found it well beyond my abilities. You did a good job. The rules are tough but you it all in.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This is very well crafted. I looked into this contest but found it well beyond my abilities. You did a good job. The rules are tough but you it all in.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I find to try and write within unfamiliar rules somehow creates/exposes words not always thought of, much appreciated
