The Bedroom
The Master Bedroom53 total reviews
Comment from Tpa
It seemed your argument is well-taken, but why did you wait so long to occupy an entity that you had purchased? A very well and satisfy journey of entertainment.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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It seemed your argument is well-taken, but why did you wait so long to occupy an entity that you had purchased? A very well and satisfy journey of entertainment.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from amada
Great poem, it expressed many frustrated feeling; therefore it is well written, from the heart. I all need a way out sometimes, great if we can just use the pen, our best friend. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Great poem, it expressed many frustrated feeling; therefore it is well written, from the heart. I all need a way out sometimes, great if we can just use the pen, our best friend. Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from MissMerri
I found this poem fun, funny, fascinating and confusing. I was confused about the verse that says... "Eighteen years so far,/and I've only slept there after a no-climb stairs/hip surgery." If the master bedroom is on the second floor, I could see how the speaker would NOT sleep there after hip surgery. But this sounds like the only time he did was after surgery. Other than that confusing part, I thought the poem was a most believable scenario of a mistreated occupant who was being a bit sarcastic and amusing all at once. Enjoyed reading this very much. So creative and clear. MM
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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I found this poem fun, funny, fascinating and confusing. I was confused about the verse that says... "Eighteen years so far,/and I've only slept there after a no-climb stairs/hip surgery." If the master bedroom is on the second floor, I could see how the speaker would NOT sleep there after hip surgery. But this sounds like the only time he did was after surgery. Other than that confusing part, I thought the poem was a most believable scenario of a mistreated occupant who was being a bit sarcastic and amusing all at once. Enjoyed reading this very much. So creative and clear. MM
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you, MM. Smiling.
Because I could not go upstairs to my bedroom, I was granted permission to use my own master bedroom on the first floor.
Until I healed.
LOL
Doug
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Oh... thank you for the explanation, Doug. Now I understand. It seems like the master of the house ought to sleep in the master-bedroom... ALL the time, though. Hmmmmm. Your poem was so visual and well-written.
Comment from paleface
Very interesting point view and mind frame, I will read more from this particular poet indeed I shall. Great job. I really appreciate the sense of humor as well.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Very interesting point view and mind frame, I will read more from this particular poet indeed I shall. Great job. I really appreciate the sense of humor as well.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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I thank you most sincerely.
Doug
Comment from JUST JEN AKAWINDYDAE
I watched my father do the very same his whole life. He never did go out on my mom but it left me feeling very sorry for men my whole life which made me attracted to bad boys and now I am a naughty woman. I love it. SOrry if your lonely. I got a DOG- BOYS ARE GONE A LOT since they are bad they don't work so it is probably not a good thing
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I watched my father do the very same his whole life. He never did go out on my mom but it left me feeling very sorry for men my whole life which made me attracted to bad boys and now I am a naughty woman. I love it. SOrry if your lonely. I got a DOG- BOYS ARE GONE A LOT since they are bad they don't work so it is probably not a good thing
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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OMG
This caught me off guard,
what a chuckle I had.
Thank you,
Doug
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written argument poem you have penned about the master bedroom. You used very good words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This is a very interesting and well written argument poem you have penned about the master bedroom. You used very good words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Teri.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done slowly builds the tension until the last line which is a knock out blow to lies, and other reasons that men stray from their partners bed well done
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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nicely done slowly builds the tension until the last line which is a knock out blow to lies, and other reasons that men stray from their partners bed well done
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you, sir.
Comment from Wendy G
This poem has been well thought through, and carefully constructed. There are many sub-themes, and the reader is forced to confront these. Thank you for a thought-provoking, ironical, wry and clever piece of writing.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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This poem has been well thought through, and carefully constructed. There are many sub-themes, and the reader is forced to confront these. Thank you for a thought-provoking, ironical, wry and clever piece of writing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review,
and such an open mind.
Doug
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
.I love the words to your poem they truly touched my heart and soul.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem
.Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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.I love the words to your poem they truly touched my heart and soul.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem
.Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Cookie.
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You're very welcome
cookie
Comment from Raul1
I find this poem interesting. You have good rhyming words and the sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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I find this poem interesting. You have good rhyming words and the sentences flow with clarity. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2021
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Thank you.
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You're welcome!
