Tear
3 line poetry contest28 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
Many reasons for tears lately. This poignant entry for the three-line poetry contest strikes a chord with many readers, I'm sure with the isolation due to covid making us all a little sad. Well done Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Many reasons for tears lately. This poignant entry for the three-line poetry contest strikes a chord with many readers, I'm sure with the isolation due to covid making us all a little sad. Well done Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Great review zanya
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You are welcome.
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Great. Take care.
Comment from Wendy G
Oh so sad, such a sense of loneliness, sorrow and nostalgia. Your choice of words hits the mark very accurately as does the accompanying image. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Oh so sad, such a sense of loneliness, sorrow and nostalgia. Your choice of words hits the mark very accurately as does the accompanying image. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Superb review zanya
Comment from papa55mike
It's funny how tearjerkers work magic in our lives. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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It's funny how tearjerkers work magic in our lives. What a wonderfully written poem. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Great reveiw and thanks for virtual 6! zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Tear
by zanya
Hello, Zanya,
Excellent entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Good syllables count. Your connection between lines can be improved.
Example of what I mean...
Tears roll down my cheeks
'cause I'm alone in locked down
watching sad movies
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Tear
by zanya
Hello, Zanya,
Excellent entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest. Good syllables count. Your connection between lines can be improved.
Example of what I mean...
Tears roll down my cheeks
'cause I'm alone in locked down
watching sad movies
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Superb review zanya
Comment from rspoet
Hello Zanya,
This is an excellent three line poem for the contest
that many will relate to, as we struggle through this
virus situation. The isolation is effecting everyone.
Well said.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Hello Zanya,
This is an excellent three line poem for the contest
that many will relate to, as we struggle through this
virus situation. The isolation is effecting everyone.
Well said.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are sad, clear and creative. Lockdown is so hard
when you live alone. I pondered after reading this poem on what I
am grateful for as it reminds me of what I do have. The artwork is great and compliments these words well. Hope you are well and safe.....Maria
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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The author's words are sad, clear and creative. Lockdown is so hard
when you live alone. I pondered after reading this poem on what I
am grateful for as it reminds me of what I do have. The artwork is great and compliments these words well. Hope you are well and safe.....Maria
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great entry for the three line contest. I am glad I am not the only one who cries when watching movies. That is one reason I would rather watch them alone, than with someone else.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Great entry for the three line contest. I am glad I am not the only one who cries when watching movies. That is one reason I would rather watch them alone, than with someone else.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
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You are welcome
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant twist on the expected--watching HIS favorite movie vs yours--you sure nailed the demoralization of lockdown--I am SOO glad I can't relate. Stunning and elegant title.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Brilliant twist on the expected--watching HIS favorite movie vs yours--you sure nailed the demoralization of lockdown--I am SOO glad I can't relate. Stunning and elegant title.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from royowen
That's possibly the worst thing about this pandemic, people that have a sole existence, are even more isolated. My wife and I at least have had each other, locked away in our cocoon, but the poor single person, thank you for thinking of them, a beautifully written three line work, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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That's possibly the worst thing about this pandemic, people that have a sole existence, are even more isolated. My wife and I at least have had each other, locked away in our cocoon, but the poor single person, thank you for thinking of them, a beautifully written three line work, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Stephen Force
Nice, no excellent job, a real tear jerker:) You have successfully managed to capture the emotional impact of separation, and offer a a sentimental way of combating it, all in seventeen syllables. not bad not bad at all. Good luck with this excellent entry. Steve
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Nice, no excellent job, a real tear jerker:) You have successfully managed to capture the emotional impact of separation, and offer a a sentimental way of combating it, all in seventeen syllables. not bad not bad at all. Good luck with this excellent entry. Steve
Comment Written 24-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
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Great review zanya
