Haiku 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Senses by the Sea"Haiku Club Submissions 2021
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Comment from royowen
I swam in the water at a pebble beach in a Greek island called Santorini, there was a vertical drop into the sea, I had a real job trying to ascend to the beach with my delicate English feet disturbed by the pain inflicted by those pebbles, heh heh. Well done, a wonderful stirring a painful memory Debra, bless you, Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I swam in the water at a pebble beach in a Greek island called Santorini, there was a vertical drop into the sea, I had a real job trying to ascend to the beach with my delicate English feet disturbed by the pain inflicted by those pebbles, heh heh. Well done, a wonderful stirring a painful memory Debra, bless you, Roy
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Ouch, Roy! I know how much that must've hurt!
Thank you for reading and for your feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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It was real heh heh
Comment from Lulube
terrific imagery, I like the "pebbles clatter", lets the force of the waves be known. Nice photo, looks like the beach that almost got me. no kidding.
lulube
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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terrific imagery, I like the "pebbles clatter", lets the force of the waves be known. Nice photo, looks like the beach that almost got me. no kidding.
lulube
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Whoops, sorry for the reminder, Lulube!
Thank you so much for your generous star rating and lovely feedback. I appreciate both :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from E. Denison
Debra - this is a beautiful bit of verse that is very fitting of a Haiku. Your description and word choice blend wonderfully with the image you have provided. This is an excellent break from so many poems on this site (though all wonderful in their own way!) that are focusing on the cold and snow. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Debra - this is a beautiful bit of verse that is very fitting of a Haiku. Your description and word choice blend wonderfully with the image you have provided. This is an excellent break from so many poems on this site (though all wonderful in their own way!) that are focusing on the cold and snow. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous review of my haiku :)
You made my day!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beautiful poem, a rhythmic wave of color and sensation:) "
saline tide
skittishly ebbs and flows -
pebbles clatter" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Beautiful poem, a rhythmic wave of color and sensation:) "
saline tide
skittishly ebbs and flows -
pebbles clatter" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Wow, Iza!
Thank you so much for your generous rating of my haiku :)
I appreciate your feedback and am glad that you enjoyed the read.
Best wishes, Debra
